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Demo update

What's new?

-More of chapter 5! (it's a big one)

-Elaine continues to express her opinions on knighthood

-Gawain reveals his surprise plan for the night

-Nimue offers Mordred a tarot reading

Link: https://llamagirl.itch.io/the-bastard-of-camelot-beta

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Comments

Yep! You should have 2 opportunities to get close to Arthur and keep in touch. First at the end of chapter 3 (meet Arthur in the library when he asks) and then at the end of chapter 4, if you weren't close, after a certain revelation, you can write to him with the intention to keep in touch.

Llama's Writing

This is one of my favorites! So detailed and immersive. I was jw tho, is it possible SPOILER to not be distanced from arthur at the beginning of ch 5?

MissMitsuko

I really enjoyed the tarot reading scene and grown-up Nimue in general. I got the sense that everything about that was very set-up on her end to help Mordred. Most of the teens at that reading have at least some sort of inkling that Mordred is "destined" for destruction whether they have been told outright or it's been implied by the adults around them since childhood. By pulling the Tower card and insisting on it having an alternative meaning, she's quietly putting support behind Mordred and changing the narrative of the prophecy in a way that will reach the people who believe in its immutability. At least some of these kids will mention this to their parents, if not other people.

John Q. Adams


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