July 22 - Second Choice Ch.4
Added 2022-07-05 16:48:06 +0000 UTCHere's the next chapter of Jaune's adventures in Atlas.
Writing article should be tomorrow.
Comments
Already love it! Sounds fun
Moonkiller24
2022-08-01 19:20:29 +0000 UTCI like how much this feels like/ is paced like the original RWBY, we had the introduction bit, then the slow introduction of cutesy supporting characters and now it had the fun/heartening first morning vibe, altho less on the nose comedy. I’m curious to see how you go about having a steady without going too OC tho
IncentBystander
2022-07-06 12:32:56 +0000 UTCI'm ready to experience the evilest Jaune: The Extra Lap Giver. These all seem very practical solutions to potential team set up. Especially when you aren't guided by plot inertia. (I mean they are, you wrote it after all. But it sure is more realistic than forcing a team and leader onto strongheaded teenagers.)
Joshua Hunt
2022-07-05 21:47:33 +0000 UTC
