Captive of the Orcs-Pages 1-2
Added 2018-02-04 14:05:37 +0000 UTCMy dear amazing patrons.
Let me introduce you two first pages of my comics Captive of the orcs. It's just the beginning of a long story. Currently I'm working on the third and forth page. I'm trying to accelerate the speed of producing content though creating comics is taking much more time and energy than separate illustrations. At the same time creating comics is amazingly cool and interesting.
You will see the next pages in the nearest future.
Please enjoy.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=19SLgKB3ZOX97qo2ymSOOZIpYYZvC11-S
Comments
I agree with you that first it's important to introduce characters to the audience. Thank you very much for your comments, very motivating.
Rino99
2018-02-07 08:23:03 +0000 UTCHey there. At first, I second marm's suggestion to have the scenes last. Further more, the beginning of your comic is definitely not boring. I like having even a small set of frames introducing the characters and getting the story rolling. Also, I really REALLY like your drawing style. This is what got me totally hooked! Those facial expressions and the the body language, very beatiful.
Dawn2069MS
2018-02-06 14:19:25 +0000 UTCnono, I dont think the beginning is boring, I mean there HAS to be an intro, right ? Also I sent you a PM.
marm
2018-02-05 10:07:08 +0000 UTCGot your hint, much appreciated. I understand that the beginning might seem boring but I was thinking of a comics consisting of appr. 20 pages. Most of the pages will include hardcore sexual scenes. Creampie will be definitely shown thoroughly as it's important for the story indeed.
Rino99
2018-02-05 07:54:30 +0000 UTCWork in progress.
Rino99
2018-02-05 07:47:41 +0000 UTCI appreaciated massively that you are not one of those artists who draw dicks the size of an arm. If I may say : make the sex scenes LAST, dont be cheap on thenumber of pages they take and, when the creampie moment come, let it take 1 or 2 pages itself. Nobody comes and then pulls out immediately as I see in too many comics. Other that that this comic is my new favourite.
marm
2018-02-05 00:00:57 +0000 UTC
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