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The Purple Flash of Kumo Chapter 54 (Phase One in the Shadows)

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Mostly to observe

Drinor

Believe it or not, in this particular mission, Root is there mostly to observe. They will try to find out if Naruto is simply a half carrier or the Jinchuuriki of Kyuubi. In this story, the personalities of Hiruzen and Danzo are different from their Canon counterparts.

Drinor

Jiraiya is struggling with his honor and loyalty towards Konoha, and his loyalty and love towards Minato and Kushina.

Drinor

Really like how you’re handling Jiraiya here, the character work in general is excellent but that deserves a callout. Great chapter!

Erinnyes

root could end up causing a war if they fail, because I always got the impression everyone knows who root takes orders from even if there is no"proof"

Elias

Ah Damm freaking hirzuen planned this so they could meet Naruto's team and is sending root operatives to observer Naruto and possibly capture him if possible

Adejandro Medina


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