A Nundu for A Pet Chapter 33 (Echoes from the Deep)
Added 2025-01-23 22:02:17 +0000 UTCClick the LINK Below to Read the Chapter
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1__Q7rKu1CJFd5FhY4YusUMzN45144TfS-1eFxb6Rnzc/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Does it work now?
Drinor
2026-01-19 11:27:03 +0000 UTCHello, the google link to read the chapter does not appear to be working.
Oenotherae
2026-01-19 11:23:45 +0000 UTCIf you are talking about what happens in Book 2 and Book 3, well, The Chamber of Secrets and the Basilisk Attacks will still happen, but a lot more different than it was in Canon, same for Book 3. As for Book 4, that's where the Canon is thrown out of the window.
Drinor
2025-01-24 19:41:41 +0000 UTCAre you going to follow major cannon points or is it going to deviate?
Ethiuum
2025-01-24 19:22:08 +0000 UTCI understand, and Thank You for your review. I think this Arc will end within 3-4 chapters, and we will return back to the ground.
Drinor
2025-01-24 17:59:24 +0000 UTCI'm still having a ton of fun with this one, but it is probably worth noting to keep an eye on pacing. As cool as the underwater world is, the plot development here is running at a pace more appropriate if this realm was where most of the story would take place, but you mentioned several other realms you want to explore (and I'm very excited to see). Wonderful work as always, I love your exploration of the world, just my $0.02 for thought!
Erinnyes
2025-01-24 17:56:31 +0000 UTCHarry has finished his first year and is in the summer before his second year starts.
Drinor
2025-01-24 08:01:41 +0000 UTCI’m happy to hear that, and the next chapter will be out soon.
Drinor
2025-01-24 08:00:44 +0000 UTCI have not read for 3-4 chapters is harry still a first year?
Michael Turner
2025-01-24 07:07:55 +0000 UTCNice cliffhanger at the end there. Looking foward to the next chapter to come out
Mauricio Perez
2025-01-23 22:21:47 +0000 UTC
