Harry Potter/Daenerys Targaryen - One Shot Part 2
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Comments
Loved the chapter except for one little thing: how Dany talks of her time with Drogo. I’m sorry but I always hate it when it’s portrayed as something good, that she misses. Let’s remember that she was sold at 13/14 years old to Drogo and raped repeatedly until she developed Stockholm syndrome and stopped wanting to kill herself. Sorry for the rant but that’s one thing I always hate. But the one shot was fantastic and it deserves a full story one day. You leave us with kind of a bittersweet ending… I’d love for something longer where Harry can slowly reveal the depths of his magic and can amaze everyone with his transfiguration, conjuration, charm, etc…
TheWateringWizard
2024-11-15 17:42:04 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter! Aw I love this ship
GrouchyGritic
2024-11-15 16:04:29 +0000 UTCIf this had been an actual story and not a One-Shot, it would have taken longer for Harry and Dany to get close, and I would have spent more time planning the story. I’m glad you liked it.
Drinor
2024-11-15 10:29:15 +0000 UTCYea.... agree with the others, this needs/should be a long story
Demeter Istvan
2024-11-15 06:19:31 +0000 UTCWe need a full fledged book of this it amazing
Darth Reven
2024-11-15 00:12:46 +0000 UTCMake this a full story, I would be intersted to see how far you could take this
Elias
2024-11-14 23:40:40 +0000 UTCWhile this is pretty good, I still think this would have been a lot better as a longer story. Doesn't really work as a oneshot, along with a few other quibbles I usually have with people who write about Dany. "Daenerys speaking of her time with the Dothraki, of losing her sun and stars.." so she told him how she was raped repeatedly until she contemplated suicide, and developed Stockholm Syndrome? Harrys power is wildly inconsistent, and the battle was pretty contrived. Other than these things, it was alright
Hakai
2024-11-14 23:35:08 +0000 UTCYa might as well make a story out of this cause I can see one.
Stemadaca
2024-11-14 22:54:15 +0000 UTCI need a full fledged book
Nash
2024-11-14 21:46:15 +0000 UTC
