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A Shinobi of Paradis Chapter 26 (The Forest's Heart)

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I like how malicious, sadistic and conniving you wrote Kurama. Reminds me of how he used to be before his name reveal. And if you ask me, this is how he should be, rather than an oversized pet with zero agency that only serves to give the MC a convenient power boost. Here he serves as the devil on Naruto’s shoulder, the one who prays on his capacity for cruelty fitting of AoT. Him coming out of the seal would only be inviting AoT’s version of the atomic weaponry age.

TARaiderBomb

I’m happy to Hear That. Naruto’s presence will change a lot of things.

Drinor

Easily my fav story on this app hoping Naruto gets the hang of mokuton in time for the next battle with titans waiting for the next chapter

Camrin Finnerty

I don't know if you have read Chapter 1 of this Story, but what happened is that when Minato died, Kushina was still alive for a bit longer, and in this version of this story, Obito comes to take baby Naruto from her. Kushina uses a scroll so that they would go somewhere. Kushina and baby Naruto appear in the world of AoT. Kushina dies, and Grisha finds Naruto. This Naruto is still the Naruto from Cannon, with Kyuubi and everything. Still, he believes that Grisha is his real father, and he doesn't know anything about the Ninja World or that it even exists because he was raised in the AoT world.

Drinor

Chapter 26 review I didn’t it till this chapter but last chapter the reason why Naruto mentioning had healing powers since he was a kid was odd as the curse of Ymir would have made him die if it was a Titan Power. I know she is using her fake name but I really like Historia and Ymir (who is actually feeling guilt) is still getting closer to Naruto. I like the cameo from Kurama who compares untrained abilities to his predecessors (and despite sharing his name still is plotting to get Naruto to release him from the seal).

William Kwok

More of this story please!

Lord Xavier


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