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A Hungry Dragon Chapter 3 (A Moment of Love)

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Glad you like it.

Drinor

Great chapter

Eva Cole

Myrcella and Margarey

Spencer Wolf

Jon will have a serious relationship with Dany, Rhaenys, Arianne, and Shiera. But I’m still working on how this story will go, and a few minor things might change.

Drinor

Hey just wondering saw this on Ao3 and just wanted clarification on love interests, cus who are the ones with actual storylines and those who are just paramours/casual sex

Daemon Targaryen's Noodle Dragon

No problem. I hope you like it, and I hope you have a good day.

Drinor

Thank you for gifting this story to me

Longclaw16

I’m thinking either 12 or 13 years old.

Drinor

Okay that’s fair ! As he doesn’t know that Lord Stark is protecting his Targ nephew and the fact that he’s also someone who knows how to hold a grudge. Glad to know there will be a time skip soon. How old will he be after if I may ask ?

TheWateringWizard

As far as Oberyn is concerned, the Starks helped Robert win the Rebellion and will help him again if Rhaenys decides to reclaim the Throne, so the Starks are still enemies. He might understand why Starks rebelled, but they will fight for Robert, so in his eyes, Starks are still enemies. There will be a time skip after Chapter 6, which will cut to an older Jon.

Drinor

The beginning between Rhae and Jon and the moments between Bella and Jon were sooooo sweet ! Loved it. There’s one thing that has me wondering, it’s how much Oberyn and by extension Rhaenys hates the North and the Starks. Sure they wouldn’t be best friends but Oberyn has a totally different perspective on the Rebellion than Viserys had when he was in exile in Essos, being fed lies and propaganda. Oberyn knows why the Starks rebelled, that they had a good reason and he knows that the Starks had absolutely nothing to do with Elia and Aegon’s death. Lord Stark was even disgusted by it. Maybe I’m wrong and they do have a good reason to hate them but I feel like it would be more appropriate for Viserys to feel that way. And Rhaenys is still probably justified to not reveal who she is to Jon. Anyway, loved the chapter. Can’t wait for more dreams and interactions between Jon and Rhae. Will Jon have them only with Rhae ? I also can’t wait for him to be older and to know more about everything. I’m guessing he’ll son learn to appreciate the ladies taking time to be pretty

TheWateringWizard

Now that I have looked up falia flowers I say yes she should be added as she would be someone who truly understands what Jon had to go through growing up she would be someone he could easily relate to and to save her from her original fate

travis btmb

If I can give an opinion, I always feel like Robb and Marg deserve to be together. They’d make a fantastic couple and I’m sad they never met in canon

TheWateringWizard

I second Falia Flowers just so she’s saved from her horrible family and the terrible fate she has in canon

TheWateringWizard

Well, that’s spoilers. But Elia wasn’t exactly happy.

Drinor

That's a great pick what about arranging an accident for Genna lannisters Frey husband and adding her she could be a nice thicc milf

travis btmb

In this story did Elia and Lyanna now about eachother everytime I see a fanfic like this and read about jonsnow I always hope Rhaegar at least had Elia and Lyanna meet

Robert Hernandez

I didn’t even know Drinor still wrote much.

Daeron Targaryen

Idk if you've read the story this fic is based on but the training arc Jon has is quite similar to that of Jean II. I believe Drinor started this fic becoz the original was abandoned.

TheChosenOne

I agree because we had her in prince of house targaryen which i cant wait for and i think you should switch it up ros i mean who wouldnt but dacey is in your other fic so maybe put a different woman of the north for this fic alys karstark and wynafred ? Or a different mormont sister i always thought of lynesse hightower idk why but i would love jon to get her but other then that good work tbh i love ur fics

Winter

He will be with Ross quite a few times and Dacey Mormont. (Maybe) I’m still not sure if Val should be with Jon in this story.

Drinor

Got you im ok with that tbh is he gonna be with any northern women in his great grandfathers castle ? Like lady bella and some other ones or maybe girls like wylla or wynafred alys ? Idk why i feel like he should have a taste of the northern girls before he goes with his actual love interests hungry dragonwolf

Winter

His name is Daemon, and that was confirmed back in Chapter 1 of this story. I like your suggestions, but there won’t be any female OC Blackfyre.

Drinor

We still deciding on jons name in this fic ? He should be daemon like daemon the rogue prince and daemon blackfyre some mix of cregan stark and aemon the dragonknight obviously we see him as a someone hungry and cunning and full of potential also arianne rhae dany so far im happy with those 3 im not a fan of margery i always felt robb should marry her they always fit im pro shiera seastar ashara and allyria dayne the sister not the daughter although im not sure if ned had a child with her also are any of the kingsguard alive ? And i agree with someone there should be a female blackfyre love interest with jon

Winter

I mean obviously haha it’s always good to be spicy, Jean was a chevalier who trained in full plate armour at all times so built his endurance.

Daeron Targaryen

Shiera Seastar

Drinor

Are you gonna be adding any older woman ?

travis btmb

Tbh don't know who that is I also forgot joy lannister gerions daughter and myranda Royce yon royces daughter

travis btmb

I’m glad you liked it. All your suggestions are good, but what about Falia Flowers?

Drinor

I like your suggestion

Drinor

None of my other GoT stories have Margaery as a love interest. So I might add her in this one. I like all your suggestions.

Drinor

I will need to read about him first. You really want things to get spicy 😏

Drinor

Tftc I say alone with the ones you listed Margery ,val,ygrite, arianne, alyria dayne asharas younger sister and myrcella but make her a true born daughter of Robert

travis btmb

I second this

DeltaArkham

Marcella but Robert is her father, thanks for the chapter

DJOK DJOK

Nice chapter. I think you should add Val and Margaery to the harem. Maybe adding Melissandre, missandei and the Sand Snakes as sex friends

maxime bégin

Jon needs to train like Jean II Le Maingre, also his harem must be very big.

Daeron Targaryen


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