Harry Potter and The Force of Magic Chapter 33 (A Gift from A Veela)
Added 2024-04-07 20:05:55 +0000 UTCClick the LINK Below to Read the Chapter
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LTFvd83ThLecuSU-D_zkVGgIV5nJwCTieJKjTXFOJI0/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Iβm glad you liked it. More will be revealed about Holy Magic, including spells that will shake the world.
Drinor
2024-04-15 05:19:49 +0000 UTCThis story has quickly become one of my favorites. There is humor, action of many types, and new abilities that I want to know more about. Originally I thought that holy powers would be about healing and defense. I'm glad to see there is more to it.
GhostnKC
2024-04-14 22:52:43 +0000 UTCI'm glad you liked, and it would be very fun if every student tried to do that.
Drinor
2024-04-11 17:08:05 +0000 UTCI laughed at the idea of owls dive-bombing the cup. Loved the chapter
TheWateringWizard
2024-04-10 19:02:17 +0000 UTCYes, it wouldnβt be fun if the challenges were exactly the same. I love Harry/Fleur stories, too.
Drinor
2024-04-09 08:26:26 +0000 UTCLike I said before, I Love Harry and Fleur pairings. Are you gonna do anything special for the tournament selection?
Genesis87
2024-04-08 23:01:22 +0000 UTCIβm glad you liked it
Drinor
2024-04-08 14:54:28 +0000 UTCIβm glad you liked it. I love writing their scenes, especially the spicy ones π
Drinor
2024-04-08 14:54:19 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Setsuna
2024-04-08 11:25:24 +0000 UTCWell i Donβt have any problem for me, i love this chapter for the relationship between Harry and Hermione, the teasing by Tonks and the letters from fleur
MAEGHT Maxime
2024-04-08 11:13:38 +0000 UTCWizards and logic donβt mix
Richard Alvarez
2024-04-08 00:17:03 +0000 UTCNo problem, just wanted to be of help cause you are writing some amazing stories and everyone makes mistakes.
Nicholas Fritz
2024-04-07 21:04:14 +0000 UTCRoger that, and sorry for the mistake. English is not my first language, so itβs a little difficult sometimes. Thanks for telling me.
Drinor
2024-04-07 20:59:42 +0000 UTCJust wanted to say that you used the words owns or owned instead of owed or owe, otherwise amazing chapter as usual.
Nicholas Fritz
2024-04-07 20:58:05 +0000 UTCI just fixed it. Can you refresh the page and tell me if itβs still doubled?
Drinor
2024-04-07 20:56:05 +0000 UTCAt least for me the story is doubled in the text above
Joshua Naugle
2024-04-07 20:54:41 +0000 UTCThank you for letting me know.
Drinor
2024-04-07 20:52:47 +0000 UTCI dont know if it's just me but there were some parts that were repeated a few times as well as some words cut off here and there. Not sure if its just on my ens or not.
Gregory Sullivan
2024-04-07 20:45:11 +0000 UTC
