The Conqueror of The Shinobi World Chapter 81 (Hinata's Despair)
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I wonder, why make Naruto the savior of Hinata from Kumo? Outside of eventually setting up relations for his goals, but he didn't really have them at the moment. This isn't about her being included, but more so, I think it would have narratively made more sense for them to interact more after she was saved. Also, on a personal level, I don't think I am a fan of Samui as a character. Sure, she's interested in Naruto because of Ay, but he never seemed the type to just give in to a woman so easily especially since their first real interaction was a small conversation on her following him then immediate fucking. She's just kind of boring with the way she's been written so far.
Tamsus Karalius
2024-06-06 23:46:58 +0000 UTCWell, when it comes to Samui, the reason why she sleeps with Naruto is because she wants to get closer to him and learn more. The Raikage told them to learn more about Naruto, and this is simply her way of trying to get more information out of Naruto in case he ever becomes a Threat. Hinata was warned not to keep her guard down and not to show mercy because the Shinobi World is not one to show mercy, and her ignoring that leads to Consequences. But this is also the start of her Character Arc. What happened in the fight is her wake-up call. There will be more about Anko and Ino soon. When it comes to Yugito, she has genuine feelings towards Naruto, and her role will be like a moral compass for Naruto, but more will be revealed later.
Drinor
2023-12-19 10:02:43 +0000 UTCThis might just be me, but I would take death over mutilation anyday.
Adam Dailey
2023-12-19 00:55:24 +0000 UTCMeh Hinata is one of my favorite character so this kinda bums me out about the story. Like if she wasn’t going to be Naruto’s bad ass woman then just ignore her and let her have happiness another way. But I mean this is your story, not mine so if you have a plan and are happy with it keep trucking. The story is interesting and I’ve enjoyed it for the most part though I agree with some other comments I’ve seen where the story is dragging a bit. We rarely see Naruto being a conquerer or enjoy him being overpowered. Additionally the romance portions almost seem very hit it and forget it. Smut for the sake of smut but little plot reason to exist. Anko and him are apparently a couple and so is Ino but there isn’t much background for that or build up. There is almost no build up for Samui besides her drooling about him. Yugito has a bit more but still less than the other two and there isn’t much tying them together like why they are okay with him just sleeping around. Feels extra weird with how jealous Ino is of them. Like she seems not okay with it so why? Feels forced. If you actually read all this though I do want to finish with I did enjoy everything overall. It’s been a fun read. I’ll probably check out some of your other stories to see if they catch my interest. I tend to lean towards Harry Potter fics.
Isabelle Kawczynski
2023-12-17 22:05:26 +0000 UTCI’m glad you like it so Much
Drinor
2023-12-11 07:00:29 +0000 UTCGooooood shit. I just got here like 5 days ago and blew through the entire story already. Shits bumpin.
MangoMakaveli
2023-12-11 03:24:27 +0000 UTCBecause Temari knew Hinata defeated her only because of the Byakugan. She got very angry by it, so without thinking much, Temari went for her eyes. If Temari hadn’t allowed her anger to consume her, she could have stabbed Hinata in the heart or slashed her neck, and it would have been game over for Hinata right away.
Drinor
2023-12-02 06:05:53 +0000 UTCDid you really have to make her lose an eye? Couldn't she have just gotten stabbed in like the stomach or something
Adam Dailey
2023-11-30 23:53:11 +0000 UTCTemari and Hinata were still fighting. As far as the Kazekage or anyone is concerned, Temari didn’t do anything that was outside of the rules for the Chunin Exams. Hell, people used to die in Chunin Exams and is still considered within the rules. Still, since the War will happen quite soon, things will go very badly for Suna, especially since Gaara has already decided to side with Naruto and Hiashi might try to do something during the whole ordeal.
Drinor
2023-11-27 09:45:17 +0000 UTCTo be fair, Samui is right. Mercy is a weakness that could easily be exploited in battle. Which is why I feel like if this was during the previous great ninja wars, hinata would have never been accepted as a ninja.
Gabe Sarti
2023-11-27 00:10:48 +0000 UTCDamn... This chapter was a good one. Seeing Hinata actually begin to use a base that will create her "Twin Lion Fists"... That was a good one, but then seeing that Temari had deceived Hinata and appears to have done what I think she did... oh god... Temari will likely be demanded as compensation for what she had done... That's if Hiashi doesn't kill the daughter of the Kazekage himself.
AnimeOtaku897
2023-11-26 23:23:35 +0000 UTCWell, the War that will happen will also ruin any kind of relationship they might have had. This event is Hinata’s biggest moment for her Character Arc
Drinor
2023-11-26 23:12:34 +0000 UTCThat will happen quite soon. Glad you liked it.
Drinor
2023-11-26 23:10:36 +0000 UTCNo! Not Hinata!
AJ
2023-11-26 23:09:59 +0000 UTCWell, after this event the relationship with Suna and Konoha will not be a good one after all this is over. Hopefully Hinata will learn a valuable lesson from this messy situation. It's good to have compassion, but there is a time and place for that.
David Beltran
2023-11-26 22:56:28 +0000 UTCNice chapter, and excited to read the fight between Naruto vs Sasuke.
Mauricio Sanchez
2023-11-26 22:55:26 +0000 UTCNo, I don’t. I’m not making her act out of character, especially when it comes to Hinata from OG Naruto and even Hinata from Naruto Shippuden to an extent. Samui warned her that mercy in the Shinobi World is not a good idea most of the time, and Hinata decided to stick to her guts, and the outcome is the Consequences.
Drinor
2023-11-26 22:49:17 +0000 UTCI honest think that you just hate Hinata
Normalpeople Ps4Gaming
2023-11-26 22:42:38 +0000 UTC
