After-hours 29 p8 up, what's next?
Added 2020-02-02 21:58:21 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
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also how bout Mary and Bonnie make out as Muggs and Fel do em from behind? Like that one time green and pawsy had on after-hours 2 https://i.imgur.com/XBQElSy.jpg
Kenno Arkkan
2020-02-02 22:12:21 +0000 UTCI wanna see some sex position suggestions too! What do you guys wanna see? I'd like to see bonnie hopping on Fel like so https://i.imgur.com/5YF4OJJ.gifv (NSFW obvs) (plspls let them be poses they can do while in the shower (so probably either standing, leaning on those things in between shower stalls, or lying down on the floor), they don't have chairs or beds or couches xD)
Kenno Arkkan
2020-02-02 22:10:29 +0000 UTCSpeaking more broadly about the story I'm thinking we should have this scene run for 2 pages, and spend the next 4 or 5 on the show they're preparing for, where we can show the remaining girls on that squad dancing, probably 1 per page, finishing on bonnie. that should leave the comic on 15 pages, which is slightly more than I usually strive for, but still not excessive like those 20+ pages comics.
Kenno Arkkan
2020-02-02 22:04:05 +0000 UTCSo, i will have to dramatically reduce the amount of characters i draw per page. this page had a whopping 20, that's way too much. Gotta be 7 or 8, tops. So, in order to make things simple, my suggestion is to focus this whole shower scene around bonnie, and use her as vehicle to show whichever other girls you wanna see. So, for example, if you wanna see muggs, she gotta plow bonnie. Wanna see mary? Then perhaps Bonnie and Mary are making out while muggs is at it. etc.
Kenno Arkkan
2020-02-02 22:00:27 +0000 UTC
