After-hours 29 p6 up, what's next?
Added 2020-01-18 03:28:32 +0000 UTCLeave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.
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But since the comic already opened with Green and Fel pages, should it be another girl this next page?
MizaruSketch
2020-01-21 15:25:07 +0000 UTCDefinitely have the shower scene have Pawsy use her fuzzy butt to Green's scaly butt to initiate things! also, would this place have a see-through hot-tub where the girls can do this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ExbaZn92ioQ&t https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Q8yu8WMd8I or would it be a tank in the showroom? x)
Thestooge
2020-01-20 16:22:52 +0000 UTCI'mma repost the idea that got 5 likes last time, about the whole structure of the comic "Thinking about the structure of the rest of the comic, how about it's bonnie dancing, then maybe a training montage, as bonnie and the crew learn and practice the coreography for the next show. Then i'm thinking a shower scene (when, y'know, actual porn will happen in this porn comic xD) and then the big show." we can start with green, but I think it shouldn't lead to sex. and not an entire page just of green. It should be all the squad, showing Bons some kind of move. That's when they head to the showers. That would be page 7, page 8 could take place in the showers, and that's when bonnie notices how everyone is just banging each other.
Kenno Arkkan
2020-01-20 14:41:31 +0000 UTCI think after Bonnie's little strip-tease, there's gotta be sex the next page. How could the girls help themselves? Mary has Bonnie's shorts right now so how about she teases her when Bonnie is looking for her clothes? Playing keep away and that goes to sex?
MizaruSketch
2020-01-18 08:36:47 +0000 UTCI think the next page should start off with bonnie training with Green; first, have Green talk to bonnie about how to REALY get the bounce out of her butt! Green will be bouncing her own cheeks with her hands while she says this. then a 3 or 4-panel montage of bonnie bouncing her booty with Green. Trying her best to mimic her movements. all while Green will be couching her with a few more smacks and prods to the butt. Then when they're talking a break Pawsy quietly comes in a gives Green a sneak slap GROPE TO THE RUMP! and the sexy times BEGIN!!! (I.E. Pawsy and Green start it out and then drag Bonnie in for a three-way!) another page of sexiness later and Bonnie is on to the next girl! Maybe Pawsy takes her to train.
Thestooge
2020-01-18 03:51:11 +0000 UTC
