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After-hours 29 p5 up, what's next?

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After-hours 29 p5 up, what's next?

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Oh oops. It's a reference to a film of the same name. Means stripping off everything.

Mr Ru

Gonna have to give me refs of what a full monty entails xd

Kenno Arkkan

Neat idea from Mizaru is she strips during the dance. Making an impression on a lot of the girls that could lead up to the sexy times later. Maybe Bons could get a little carried away and they have to stop her doing 'the full monty' since they're in the gym?

Mr Ru

When the training montage start I was think of it could go something like this when she training with the girls or by herself https://youtu.be/8OyRL48ADjQ Also this from the movie flashdance so as this one https://youtu.be/_Z8SwE3RzY8 The famous water chair scene maybe this can be a solo for Bonnie at the end.

SirClicks

I was thinking similar but each group teaches her a key twerk move. And they could do a couple shows where afterwards they 'service' some audience members in the dressing room or fel just goes to town on the other girls to relieve some pent up sexual energy.

MizaruSketch

For the shower scene we could use more futa girls in it like Mugger and Trace. After they done practicing they head in and see Mugger and Trace doing each other then Fel jumps in and all the girls jump in as well and it’s one big orgy.

SirClicks

Should Bonnie remain in her usual getup for her dance or decide to strip down to underwear for full effect? Sportsbra and thong, perhaps?

Mr Ru

Maybe also for the shower scene have Pawsy use her fuzzy butt to scrub her GF's scaly butt x)

Thestooge

I think the structure is a great Idea! It could have all the girls teaching Bonnie their moves, shaking her booty next to green in one panel and then next to Marie in anothers or have whole pages dedicated to training and sexing with the girls. One girl a page! As for the direct next page I think the girl's praising should have them jumping up and down, showing their bootys bounce! https://sta.sh/023jlk9ppb9n

Thestooge

Shower scene would be a nice chance for 'carrot friends' to happen. Could be something that happens with Bonnie on her own before Mary or some other girl catches her or it's just all the girls showering together and Bonnie's surprise when various pairs start having sex. [edit] I guess the latter but all girls attention being on Bonnie could be a third option. Probably shouldn't make it too bon centric though.

Mr Ru

Thinking about the structure of the rest of the comic, how about it's bonnie dancing, then maybe a training montage, as bonnie and the crew learn and practice the coreography for the next show. Then i'm thinking a shower scene (when, y'know, actual porn will happen in this porn comic xD) and then the big show. How does that sound? :X

Kenno Arkkan

How bout next page is just Bonnie shakin' it? Page would end with the rest of the girls cheering and praising her. Mentioning how she's more than ready for the real deal.

Kenno Arkkan


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