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After-hours 26p2 up, what's next?

leave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with.

I really wanted to limit the amount of girls in tights cuz that would hide some of the grills main features D; 

The script for next page goes something like this:
"p3. Next is some cardio with Bonnie and the trio. (jumping jack exercise) Shot of Mugger wiggling her rack as she jumps up and down.  The wide moves makes her glance at something by the window. She sees her neighbour, Miss Fel, doing the same thing in her own living room. They blush and the voice from the tv is making the transition to the nexte page. "

What  would you like to add? what would you change?

After-hours 26p2 up, what's next?

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something like the laying down booty jiggle move she does here: <a href="https://youtu.be/C6vinrXWxls?t=33" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://youtu.be/C6vinrXWxls?t=33</a>

MizaruSketch

Maybe the ending line for the next page could be: "let's move on to some glute exercises!" <a href="https://youtu.be/B81WPIvuJZg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://youtu.be/B81WPIvuJZg</a> and both Muggs and Fel could be doing it! X)

Thestooge

a though the leg explanation?

Arukath Hellsaint

The next page should have more Bonnie and be a camera angle from behind so the booties can get the attention they deserve. Maybe some kind of exercise move that is ridiculously sexual but they treat it as if it's normal.

MizaruSketch


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