AH25p21 up, what's next?
Added 2018-09-01 00:57:55 +0000 UTCI loved the poses so much I used them all!! Really wanted this to feel like an emotive moment for green, so went with more vivid colors and motifs like the intro to the game.
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I like it! let's have her uniform be REAL tight on her butt! X)
Thestooge
2018-09-01 01:24:14 +0000 UTCWhat if next page marks the ending of the comic?I was thinking the end could be slightly different to the game. The boss doesn't just explode after climax. Say, first frame is green and eclair lying on their sides, exhausted, covered in juices, panting. we imply some dialogue. Green looks sad. Next frame is the boss lying down, eyes closed, happy. With the flowers turning red for dramatic measure, as Green runs away, not looking back. Next frame has her climbing a chopper. The site is visible from a-far. a patch of red flowers amidst a white meadow. Jets flying overhead. Here is where Green could begin her monologue, explaining the boss' true mission. "the boss' defection was a set up by the government, It was all a big drama to avoid a nuclear holocaust. And the boss was the star of the show. She was planted to gain the reds' trust, and destroy them from the inside, bringing along a nuclear warhead to prove her new loyalty. Everything was going according to plan, except that one Coronel Alpha recklessly used it on her own countrymen." The reds demanded that the government provided proof that it wasn't involved. They had to get rid of the boss... and one of their own would have to do the job." Im thinking an establishing shot with volgin-alpha standing next to the boss, followed by another frame of alpha shooting the nuke from the chopper. Next page after that would wrap the whole monologue as green is condecorated (obviously naked as everyone around her looks awkwardly and uncomfortable) and visits the graveyard (now in uniform?). With how dying to green's hands was her mission and how she was never gonna be able to go back home alive, disgraced forever by both sides. (gonna start writting verbatim) "that was her final mission. and like a true soldier she saw it through to the end. She wanted to live on, on green's memory. History will never know what she did, her story, will live on her heart. Everything she did, she did for her country. She was a real hero, she was a true patriot. " Shot of green doing the salute (we never gave her a reason to have an eyepatch tho!!)" The end.
Kenno Arkkan
2018-09-01 01:19:54 +0000 UTC
