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After-hours 24 p15 up, what's next?

leave your ideas below! We should wrap this one up

After-hours 24 p15 up, what's next?

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Thestooge

How about the page starts with an afterglow frame, Bonnie cuddling inside Aldo's arms. Aldo could ask if it was what she was expecting. Bonnie, giggling and looking away, says it was that and much more. Could be any dialogue, really :O something cute. Next frame Bonnie is walking out the door, we can see aldo in the back still lying on the bed. "M-may i take a quick shower?--" Next frame immediatly after, the buns come through the door "Surpriiiiiiise!" With the cake saying on top "Congratulations on the sex!" with some dicks drawn in frosting here and there. Bonnie of course absolutely stunned!

Kenno Arkkan

Thanks Ru!

Thestooge

Though Stooge's idea of them barging into the bedroom is also funny. Al would instantly be ʘ ʘ too

Mr Ru

I figure we have a bit of closing monologue by Bonnie as she rolls on her back in afterglow. Pussy shot of the creampie, before she sits up and wipes herself and looks over at Al exhausted in bed. Then she walks out the bedroom to take a shower, only to walk buck naked into a surprise party with confetti and Fel holding at 'congrats on the dick' cake. "Auntie!!"

Mr Ru

Ok how's this for a wrap up: all the girls burst in yelling "SURPRISE!!! CONGRATS ON SEX BONNIE!!!" then have a panel or two of them all at a table enjoying the cake (and giving some advice for future escepades) then have have Al and Fel say their goodbyes as all the buns leave for the night. And finally have a nice big close up of FEL'S BUTT with Al's hand on it, saying to her "I still prefer THIS cake" giving her butt a few good "honks" for a nice THE END gag!

Thestooge

It's here!

Jack of Hearts


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