After-hours 24 p10 up, what's next?
Added 2018-01-20 03:46:52 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below, give a like to those you're ok with!
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I'd rather it just end with a nude Bonnie being caught by a surprise party as she walks out the bedroom.
Mr Ru
2018-01-21 07:16:52 +0000 UTCActually had a thought that since Fel is calling the Buns right away, they could be the ones bringing the cake and party favours. They have the speed and people at the den to put a decorated cake together on short notice. So it could be Fel munching on bacon popcorn for a page until they show up. I imagine them trying to all look in the peephole at once and settling for turns as others prepare stuff in the background.
Mr Ru
2018-01-21 07:11:09 +0000 UTCmy bad, thx.
Kenno Arkkan
2018-01-20 14:02:25 +0000 UTCI think access settings of this post are broken. I can see it.
Dejiro
2018-01-20 10:45:00 +0000 UTCOh, also, i dont think we have discussed the ending. These series usually end with a pointer towards the next potential sequel. How about, if we go with the cake, they end fucking, bons goes to the bathroom, and on her way out the buns and fel congratulate her with the cake, and that's where that ends. The /very/ last page could have Bonnie being eaten out in that same bedroom. It's Fel doing the eating. And just as she's about to climax, Aldo comes along, hard and ready to go. "You girls done warming up?" WIth Fel spreading bonnie's legs all "Yeh, fuck her in the pussy!" I think it would be a nice nudge to Bonnie being welcomed into "the lifestyle", as well as dipping our toes into a threesome with Fel as lots of people seem to be interested in. I'm thinking that after this experience, well, Bonnie would like to continue fucking :U who doesn't. And the easiest way to do it is with these two, at least for her first few times. Although maybe i'm pushing it too much? IDK, wanna hear your thoughts.
Kenno Arkkan
2018-01-20 05:22:42 +0000 UTCI think fel could look at bonnie's buns and thinks to herself; "Man her butt's gotten toned! not like mine..." and have a frame of her rubbing her big ole booty! (that might I say is lookin extra bubbly in this page! ;) )
Thestooge
2018-01-20 05:12:57 +0000 UTCNow, for actual action, the page could start with Fel going to do -whatever we decide she does-. Next frame has Aldo on his back now. "My knees could use a break, it's your turn, bons, but remember... careful." Bonns would be on top of him, with a starry eyed, focused face. "Not get carried away. Maximize sex duration. Got it." Next frame could have her riding the tip, slowly, like this <a href="https://78.media.tumblr.com/c42b698bace3b277d8455e38a945364f/tumblr_p2txts45OF1w10436o1_400.gif" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://78.media.tumblr.com/c42b698bace3b277d8455e38a945364f/tumblr_p2txts45OF1w10436o1_400.gif</a> and being all self conscious, now that she's the one setting the rhythm. "I-is this okay?" "does it feel good?" "how am i doing?" "Is it okay if I go all the way down?" and the like. The page could end with her all the way in, breathing deeply and shivering as she settles into it, monologuing on how it feels, wondering what does aldo like, and thinking what and how does Fel do it to him.
Kenno Arkkan
2018-01-20 04:03:28 +0000 UTCFor next page, first i wanted to discuss what is Fel going to do. I liked the idea of the cake, Fel cooks and she can whip out something rudimentary in the next 30 mins. It also gives us the smell element, which we discussed on the discord once and I found pretty great. Fel would be baking, say, a carrot cake, and Aldo would notice the smell while they're upclose, and say something like "hmmm, bonnie, you smell like freshly baked carrot cake" To what bons would insta-blush, and pull her ears in front of her face to hide. I just thought it was an interaction too good to leave behind. But the cake, instead of "congratulations on the sex" a la lonely island, could be something like "Congratz on your first cock!" or something. I just feel "congratz on the sex" sounds like it's her first time, which it isn't thanks to Fel D: inb4 lesbian sex is not sex. It's just her first time with a dude.
Kenno Arkkan
2018-01-20 03:53:40 +0000 UTC
