Page 9 of AH15 up. what's next?
Added 2016-04-23 04:40:52 +0000 UTCWelp, I connected last frame with page 9. So we're closing up. Leave any suggestions or ideas below >o< I put boots on alex as it was suggested before ;w; i tried.jpg
Also i totally forgot of soph's stockings in the last couple of pages <.< i gotta fix that.
have a great weekend!
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what about on top of the building like in the lonely island i just had sex video or just posing with their hands in the air.
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-04-25 23:33:47 +0000 UTCI was thinking splitting the end in 2 pages maybe? So 1 for a biiiiiiiiiiig frame of the facial, and then maybe two small ones of them the next day at the truck chatting, then the next page could be Michael being charged the astronomical bill for all the stuff the girls consumed and that frame back at Erobox the next workday?
Kenno Arkkan
2016-04-25 13:31:12 +0000 UTCI like the idea of a last panel! BUt i can't think of a witty punchline for it <.< some back and forth between mugger and Fel or Fel inquiring Michael and Mugger how their trip was D:
Kenno Arkkan
2016-04-25 13:28:25 +0000 UTC... xwx i found them confusing since the beginning but they got voted up :U
Kenno Arkkan
2016-04-25 13:23:38 +0000 UTCxD np! It's my bad now haha
Kenno Arkkan
2016-04-25 13:19:28 +0000 UTCas for closing page we get the big facial/afterglow, the girls ttalking about how hot last night was and how they should do it again. and if theres enough room a back at Erobox panel kind of Fel and Mugger working with big smiles
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-04-25 00:19:44 +0000 UTCas appreciated as the boots are them not being there in the pages prior make them stick out in a confusing way .
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-04-25 00:14:52 +0000 UTCoh damn sorry for missing the lack of stockings Kenno
Arukath Hellsaint
2016-04-25 00:08:23 +0000 UTC
