After-hours 14 p10 up. what's next?
Added 2016-03-12 17:25:50 +0000 UTCleave your ideas below. Like the ones you're ok with! Think we got 1 or 2 pages left :O
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we can pretty much fuse this idea with your other post above :O!
Kenno Arkkan
2016-03-13 18:05:07 +0000 UTCI was thinking if it's two pages then second page we could see Al cum in Fel and Bonnie cumming, with her rubbing her pussy and squirting a bit as she bits on a pillow muffling her moans. Then panting as she falls asleep. Next page Bonnie waking up looking at her pussy and seeing how wet it is. Fel then calls her for breakfast and gets dressed. As they eat breakfast Fel says you must have had a good sleep and winks to her, to which Bonnie blushes a bit as Fel giggles while Al looks at them wondering what their talking about.
MaxL8
2016-03-12 21:23:27 +0000 UTCMugger ending: Bonnie is dressed to leave and holding the box as she talks with Fel. We read their dialogue as Al is putting the foldup bed away and notices the wall socket is loose. When Fel walks in after Bonnie has left, Al shows her the hole and the Mugger picture and you can guess the rest.
Mr Ru
2016-03-12 21:12:13 +0000 UTCWe cut to morning. Fel sneaks out early and whispers to Bonnie to ask if she's decent. She looks around the corner just as Bonnie makes a moan. "You've been going all night?!" Fel says as we get a panel of Bonnie laying on the bed in an absolute mess of afterglow and thick juices, pulling the dildo out. (Maybe some throw in random 'butt prints' on the walls and other stuff where she mounted it.) If we go with the mugger ending after that, the final panel could have a caption like "A shower and house clean later..." with some Fel/Bonnie dialogue.
Mr Ru
2016-03-12 20:31:19 +0000 UTCAll I can really think of is the ending, with Fel finding the truth and pretty much blowing a gasket as she realizes it's Mugger's doing.
MaveriKat
2016-03-12 18:53:19 +0000 UTC
