after-hours 10 starts, ideas for next page
Added 2015-08-06 03:05:01 +0000 UTCleave em below!
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i had to disregard your first post suggestion cuz i was literally already done with the page xOx I love your idea for the rest of the comic tho.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-08-08 03:58:33 +0000 UTC(Ideas for later) After cumming(?), she inspects the toy and thinks of a way to improve it, speeds through the shop with no pants on to attach a vibrating motor and immediately starts using it again, leaning against the desk. - She strips off completely at some point whilst going Tony Stark with improvements. Maybe montage page of "MK3, MK4, etc" prototypes with her using them until we stop at her final creation for the finale. Could be anything from the fuckchair to a futafel robot. - It gets crazy and she passes out for a mad Mugger to find the mess in the morning.
Mr Ru
2015-08-08 02:51:16 +0000 UTC(Throwing together some of the ideas here and see if it floats) So... Page starts with Bonnie admiring the completed dildo and talking about the 'data' she used to design it. She gets started with tidying the shop but looks back at the toy and gets visually horny. She decides she better give it a quick test just in case, pulls her pants down and sits to use it. Tight squeezes and imaginary futafels ensue.
Mr Ru
2015-08-08 02:37:34 +0000 UTCWe can't do paragraphs anymore though.
Mr Ru
2015-08-08 02:20:31 +0000 UTCThat's a great idea ru :O!!! im all up for it.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-08-07 21:23:53 +0000 UTCMaybe when she uses it, we see her fantasy as a ghostly Fel plowing into her.
Mr Ru
2015-08-07 20:55:09 +0000 UTCyes Kenno, she could "warm up" while cleaning or have an 80's style dancing while cleaning montage
Arukath Hellsaint
2015-08-07 04:16:32 +0000 UTCyeah i like that idea Kenno maybe throw a winking thumbs up Al bubble
Arukath Hellsaint
2015-08-07 04:14:22 +0000 UTC:O there's a reply thing now. and there's likes like I requested WOO!
Kenno Arkkan
2015-08-07 01:38:51 +0000 UTCYay, no more downvotes. Boo, no more replying to replies.
Mr Ru
2015-08-06 22:56:46 +0000 UTCI was thinking it would be funny if she kept putting off work to test the toy and actually makes the mess worse as she hastefully uses the shop's equipment and resources for upgrades. All leading towards Mugger finding a sexed out bunny in a pile of prototype sextoys. - Really not sure about the dildo on a chair idea for the first go, since it's untested and probably needs easing in? I dunno, I just think it would be hotter if Bonnie's gentle about it and savoring the moment, before she starts pounding down on it.
Mr Ru
2015-08-06 17:25:56 +0000 UTCI do like the idea of a mild warmup before getting started. I do like the idea of her riding a chair with the dildo snapped into it. I have an idea for how it continues. Perhaps after every time she tries it, she thinks of a way to improve it. So after a while of humping the chair, she's like "...what would happen if I somehow attached this to a drill....?" and runs to do so, Then after trying that she's like "Ok, I need back and forth motion, what if I use this or that" and goes and tries that, and then "Ok i need a surface or a bed to do this" and aconditionates a table. and so the fuckmachine takes shape. Of course this is more of an idea for the rest of the comic
Kenno Arkkan
2015-08-06 14:08:18 +0000 UTCPerhaps the toy does take a while to print, or perhaps takes a while for the material to cool off or harden completely. In the meanwhile, perhaps a large frame, she just tidies the entire place in a blink with her bunny powers :$ That's when perhaps a clock dings and she goes back to the printer and the dildo is ready. then we proceed with everything else.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-08-06 13:34:25 +0000 UTCyeah i don't want to go too deep into the future lore since who knows what might happen XD What if I do a future spinoff some years from now and I have to do something different D::: It would feel bad if it was not-canon-esque. Now, I had a similar idea to this. Perhaps nudge to another character. Say, bonnie could have a "Kouhai" moment and be like "I'll call this... vlad the impaler. Uncle Al was cool enough to send me some pics and all the deets of Fel's... cock... for me to do the model... *starry eyes while looking at the dildo* ...Fel senpai~ AHahaha perhaps the senpai thing is too much but i think it's funny.
Kenno Arkkan
2015-08-06 13:29:49 +0000 UTCI do remember her having a boyfriend in one of Kenno's concepts for Adult Bonnie but I imagine this is all about the toy for this instance. Like she did research into the optimal shape and such, so she's excited to find out how it feels.
Mr Ru
2015-08-06 05:06:09 +0000 UTCWhat if we have a scene where Bonnie is getting warmed up while imagining the person she modeled the toy after?
Jason
2015-08-06 04:27:24 +0000 UTCMaybe it would be more natural if Bonnie intended to just print the toy, stash it for later and get on with tidying the shop but then the prospect of a 'test run' crosses her mind. Starting the downward spiral.
Mr Ru
2015-08-06 04:19:38 +0000 UTC(A more 'get to the point' option): The printer dings, Bonnie marvels at the toy, pulls down the spats and warms up whilst licking it for a panel. Was thinking she could plant it on the chair to ride on but there will probably be lots of that with the machine stuff. Maybe she could just use it by hand on a chair or desk and react as she slowly pushes it in. (Bunnies go big afterall)
Mr Ru
2015-08-06 03:51:55 +0000 UTCStating that the print will take a few minutes to finish, She pulls down her spats and gets comfy on a chair to warm up. clit rubbing, fingering, etc. Then the machine dings and she marvels at the monstrosity she created before using it in the next page.
Mr Ru
2015-08-06 03:35:43 +0000 UTCIt begins.
MaveriKat
2015-08-06 03:19:26 +0000 UTC
