page 1 of after hours III is up! Suggestions! Who should he find first?
Added 2014-05-28 00:38:45 +0000 UTCBig question for next page and the rest of the story: Who is he going to find first? Is it going to be soph as i suggested first? Should it be Fel for canon's sake? Or who do you want?? In the idea I had, this first hybrid he finds will be his sidekick for the rest of the story, and will work as his "mentor", showing him the hybrid tribe world thing, (it will also be the first sex scene ;) ) so yeah, it's important.
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oh snap!
Kenno Arkkan
2014-05-30 15:16:05 +0000 UTCtotally.
Kenno Arkkan
2014-05-30 15:15:32 +0000 UTCWho doesn't?
Garrett
2014-05-30 05:06:14 +0000 UTCyes plz
Tinybone
2014-05-30 04:27:17 +0000 UTCboku boku
Slikfiji
2014-05-30 04:19:34 +0000 UTCI love that crab, put him in the background throughout the comic doing cute crab stuff
Slikfiji
2014-05-30 04:19:15 +0000 UTChe trips and falls face first into her ass! if Two-ts is to be believed, Soph has a thing for analingus ^.^
Slikfiji
2014-05-30 04:18:26 +0000 UTCWHAT A TWIST! call m night shiamaladingdong.
Kenno Arkkan
2014-05-30 02:39:48 +0000 UTCHmm interesting ideas =O but i still believe -something- should happen at the beginning. Someone once said that every porn comic should have all it's conflicts started and resolved with sex scenes. Maybe just a handjob or something simple like that =O I'm thinking he'll accidentally fall to the water and soph is going to help him get up and be like "hmm it's been a while since we've seen a man, might as well take advantage myself!"
Kenno Arkkan
2014-05-30 02:38:01 +0000 UTCThe crab. The crab touches the mysterious glowing pool and gains mysterious adventuring power and/or sexiness. Clearly the crab is already acting as a helpful guide to the island anyway. This was obviously the subtle and ingenious plan from the start, no?
Tinybone
2014-05-29 22:19:56 +0000 UTCnoted :o
Kenno Arkkan
2014-05-28 20:37:56 +0000 UTCnice :O she could be one of the priestesses :P
Kenno Arkkan
2014-05-28 20:37:13 +0000 UTCI can see Soph as the first person he meets that leads him around and such but I can't see her being in a sex scene right off the bat. Maybe if she were to try and coerce him into it throughout his adventure and eventually get him to succumb. I think it would be interesting to play it out like an eroge and have him meet a girl at a time and maybe two at another time. And just have moments with them one after another. Maybe even have each girl play telephone and have them all want playtime as they start hearing about what the girl(s) before them had received.
2014-05-28 17:40:31 +0000 UTCSoph clearly needs some sex and love :D
2014-05-28 14:15:34 +0000 UTCSoph here as well ;P
2014-05-28 14:13:28 +0000 UTCYou could always say that' it's the local's name for the island or something.
Mr Ru
2014-05-28 11:00:53 +0000 UTCside note, since we're doing desert island theme, it might be neat if Monica got a feature segment in this chapter or something
Dragon tooth
2014-05-28 07:18:18 +0000 UTCYep yep. Gotta vote Soph
Dragon tooth
2014-05-28 07:12:24 +0000 UTCThe Island of Beautiful Beasts then.
Maximum
2014-05-28 05:00:30 +0000 UTCTwo ideas/vote: The Island of Dr. Alex, and the girl in the last panel should TOTALLY be green. Maye I'm a bit obsessed with green, though.
Cody
2014-05-28 04:41:12 +0000 UTCgotta be in english tho xD
Kenno Arkkan
2014-05-28 03:56:28 +0000 UTCThe Island of Dr. Alex
Thannak
2014-05-28 03:41:23 +0000 UTCAlso voting for [bear sounds]
Mr Ru
2014-05-28 03:18:01 +0000 UTCsoph needs some love
AzuraDio
2014-05-28 03:17:03 +0000 UTCYeah, voting for Soph. As for a title for the story... "My Life with FeLOST"..
MaveriKat
2014-05-28 01:38:09 +0000 UTCAlso, I'd say the name of the comic (if this is the right place to suggest for the title) should be, "La isla de la belleza bestial"
Maximum
2014-05-28 01:37:47 +0000 UTCSoph or Green are my votes in that order. I think they best fit the theme of the island starting out
MasterShake
2014-05-28 01:15:02 +0000 UTCI say he should meet mugger bathing under a waterfall first; she and him were always a "what if...?" couple to me.
Maximum
2014-05-28 01:14:09 +0000 UTCYeah, make it Soph. She's got that 'village wierdo' appeal to her; finding Al she decidedly brings him back because' ''Look, a human! Isn't that neat?'
2014-05-28 00:53:08 +0000 UTCI like soph because A) there's not enough soph and B) She is kind of a smart ass, so she works for the role of "I'll show you the hybrid tribe world and all its curiosities", that way I can make her say ANYTHING about the world and it will sound like legit xD
Kenno Arkkan
2014-05-28 00:44:39 +0000 UTCI like soph as the guide, but most of the girls would work.
Garrett
2014-05-28 00:40:49 +0000 UTC
