IFAP-C04P03
Added 2020-08-28 14:06:06 +0000 UTCWhat could go wrong...
Comments
To start, I admire the progress and depiction on how your characters have accumulated the pounds since your initial chapter. Penny has become a butterball, and although sexually stunning, the weight she has put on generates a thoroughly blubbery appearance. Maggie is in the pleasing plump category, lovely in her own right, and I admire how her face has filled out, her tummy’s buttery condition and the expanse to her thighs - chunky thighs are so very appealing. Maggie’s softer features make her appear far less high maintenance than she did at the start of the story, hopefully this is hint to her character taking on a much more relax if not docile approach to munching on Penny’s cuisine. Finally, Maggie’s thighs nudging together is significantly beautiful, and you have a natural flair in depicting breasts. Kudos well deserved.
Matt L.
2020-08-29 08:19:38 +0000 UTCPenny’s round and proud!
Cousin Dave
2020-08-28 14:13:21 +0000 UTC
