(Azur Lane) Atago's Artillery Ass
Added 2024-03-12 00:48:27 +0000 UTCDownload PDF for the story! A short story I wipped up by request, written with my first take on Mid Story Pic Formatting! Hope everyone enjoys! And this one will be Private as it's of an edited commission.
Comments
For being something written in a day, this story was pretty great! Sometimes the simpler things are nice, just ate the wrong thing and is blown up and blowing everything else up as well! The idea of her gas being so plentiful and so forceful being enough to start effecting the room she was in was pretty great as well. Real sense of "ton of gas". Then of course the climax was really something too, the way she is thinking about the commander and how she just explodes in multiple ways made the ending pretty satisfying. Definitely a story I'll go back to from time to time!
Jcaxlive
2024-03-12 08:22:21 +0000 UTCYaaaay! And pretty good for basically all of it being written in a day!
Chimera134
2024-03-12 02:45:45 +0000 UTCOooh free stuff!!! All seriousness, very fun story with some good, juicy hyper action. The fire ass pictures embedded in the story really help with the visualization of the events in the story. >>>Spoilers LOL<<< The BLOAT onomatopoeia was insanely hot to me and I so desperately wish more authors utilized bloat or inflation onomatopoeias in their stories, would be next level I tell ya! And the fact that she never truly ran out of fruity gas and Atago’s farty bombing campaign just kept escalating and escalating… SO GOOD!! I’d like to note the phantom fornication was also really interesting and sexy too, Atago riling herself up like that, got me all tingly and shit lol. Last thing, excellent tummy action as usual Chimera, you really know how to make it seem a girl is about to level a place with her nuclear ass and belly! Short and sweet, I certainly got a kick out of it!
Tree Fiddy
2024-03-12 02:28:09 +0000 UTC
