One last Poll!!
Added 2018-08-08 13:46:51 +0000 UTCHey guys!
Okay I think i nearly have this ending figured out and unfortunately it's not where the last poll indicated. ><!
After much consideration, I'm leaning towards making the last line in the Bruce/Carl scene the last line of the epilogue and book.
Having said that I still have one more issue. The scene that is currently in between the two Bruce scenes, where Reece sees lady Diana is my conundrum. On one hand, it does leave the party at a point of uncertainty, but i'm not sure how much impact or value it has, especially sandwiched in between the Bruce scenes.
My question is, should i include this scene in the Epilogue at all or just leave it out completely and have the two Bruce/Carl scenes as the full Epilogue and ends the party's story in Chapter 45.
If i remove it, then them racing across the caldera becomes the opening scene for the next book.
If i keep it in, then the opening of the next book is where Reece reacts to seeing Lady Diana with fury rising in his chest.
The better opening for the next book is a decision point too.
So i need your opinions yet again. If i make the Bruce/Carl scenes the ending, do i keep that scene in between them in there or not.
Please vote and comment below!! :D
P.s. Ack! I forgot to include an option for if you don't agree that point is the best ending, but if you don't, just leave a comment.
Comments
Well that's a tough one... I don't envy that decision in the least but either way it's a good ending and just depends how much of a cliffhanger you want. For me it was kinda like Dakota krouts 2nd book in Divine dungeon, I had to break away from that series for a little because the massive cliffhanger got under my skin a little but I came back to it anyway since it's a damn good series.
Will's Fainting Goat
2018-08-09 04:17:48 +0000 UTCThanks guys... man a dead heat!! xD Still to tough to decide.
Rick Scott
2018-08-08 22:56:13 +0000 UTC
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