New Changes
Added 2018-08-06 04:21:55 +0000 UTCok guys, based on your feedback I made some changes to Chapter 45 and 46. Specially I made the Witgar fight a lot more epic.
With this in mind, I feel like the ending of 45 is a bit more satisfying than before. If you re-read 46 and find it now a bit overkill please do let me know if you think the book could be cut short sooner.
Or if you like the new changes as is, please let me know too!
Thanks again for all your help and feedback guys! It's truly appreciated!
-Rick
Comments
Thanks! I was tempted to throw a Turf War notification in there just for you xD
Rick Scott
2018-08-06 11:08:20 +0000 UTCThe scene was definitely more epic and satisfying.
Robert Quach
2018-08-06 06:24:11 +0000 UTC