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Need your input true believers!!!

Okay so I've pretty much got just a couple scenes left and i have a couple of loose threads i need you'll input on.


1) I may have an opportunity to have the goddess of the zone appear again. It's something that may or may not be important to the plot, but my question is, would it feel too jarring for the pacing and tone of the story at this point? it's a lose thread i left from book two and just havent found a spot to tie it back into the story. 


2) I'm deciding on the effects for the drop from Witgar... the favor of the gods. Its not a plot device for the current book, but it could have that potential. Other than that though, i'm looking for some cool ideas  for what the item could do game mechanic wise. Let me know in the comments below!


Thanks for your help guys!


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Comments

Yeah tying them together might be good!

Rick Scott

Wow I totally love that idea! And the lore implications. I wonder if it might be too much to shoehorn into the last 5% of a book, but I'm crazy enough to maybe try it xD

Rick Scott

Well you could take Matt's idea a bit further seeing as you setup Witgar as, builder of the home of the gods. Have the goddess be his promised wife and the item be some sort of building hammer. As for the blessing Maybe giving bouneses to town construction, or allowing the ability to repair structures at no cost?

Marcus Vasquez

You could tie them both together. The goddess could arrive to grant the blessing, item, or whatever form the gods' favor takes.

Dax


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