Chapter 2343
Added 2023-06-04 15:02:56 +0000 UTCComments
"He trusted his stats, but that didn’t mean he was fool enough to try and wade through lava to fight against a foe. An individual who attempted that could very reasonably be called unhinged." Very funny call back!
Mushiden
2023-06-05 12:35:03 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2023-06-04 21:03:15 +0000 UTCHands on hips like the classic Superman pose
Lorem Holthier
2023-06-04 20:56:19 +0000 UTCcan someone describe what 'arms akimbo' means? I just picture it as Randidly standing in a T pose for some reason, and I don't think that's what puddles is going for...
Shane Fletcher
2023-06-04 17:45:23 +0000 UTC‘Wind WHORLED around the bullet’ (maybe s/b WHIRLED-although the usage of WHORLED is an interesting option.)
ArDee
2023-06-04 15:19:20 +0000 UTC‘The monster raised its head and BLEACHED out lava.’ (s/b BELCHED)
ArDee
2023-06-04 15:08:43 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2023-06-04 15:03:07 +0000 UTC
