Chapter 1739
Added 2021-04-22 03:21:55 +0000 UTCComments
'Tithe your receive' your -> you OR your -> you will
Corwin Amber
2021-04-25 13:16:19 +0000 UTCI bet you the new image, is an image the MC is very familiar with.
Thundermike00
2021-04-22 11:12:26 +0000 UTC> he would need to soon head to he would soon need to head to (opinion - this ordering reads more smoothly to me)
George Hicken
2021-04-22 09:33:25 +0000 UTC> With how quickly the driven him With how quickly his driven self
George Hicken
2021-04-22 09:30:45 +0000 UTC> Because Randidly had begun experiencing the vast spectrum of light with his body, due to his Fatepiece. He peeled the light back layer by layer. Punctuation - should it be “Fatepiece, he peeled”? Or maybe drop the opening “Because”.
George Hicken
2021-04-22 09:26:19 +0000 UTC> was pulled back past the point of no return was pulled past - back implies it’s escaped after the point of no return
George Hicken
2021-04-22 09:22:53 +0000 UTC> Its suctions was overwhelming. suction Way more errors in the first portion of this chap than normal for you - might need another period read.
George Hicken
2021-04-22 09:20:29 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-04-22 08:58:32 +0000 UTCI was wondering how he could see updated notifications again, now I understand.
SunderGoldmane
2021-04-22 06:24:51 +0000 UTC“The reward should trustworthy” “The reward should be trustworthy”
SunderGoldmane
2021-04-22 06:23:15 +0000 UTC“So he gave him vague language” “So (they or it) gave him vague language”
SunderGoldmane
2021-04-22 06:22:31 +0000 UTC“The human light Couldn’t detect” “The Human (eye or sight) couldn’t detect”
SunderGoldmane
2021-04-22 06:21:21 +0000 UTC“Spread transformed his image” “Spread his transformed image”
SunderGoldmane
2021-04-22 06:20:18 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2021-04-22 04:59:49 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2021-04-22 03:22:13 +0000 UTC
