Chapter 1730
Added 2021-04-13 04:13:54 +0000 UTCComments
I like how the romance between them is and written, but it still irk me how it started suddenly and out of nowhere, the start was feeling so forced and out of character with him suddenly smited by her with the little thing about her exagerated when he have already see it 1000 time the same thing in other people in his travel and it get him no cold or hot on it before I still feel like she is a total stranger of the story and MC and have nothing to be here and she get patched in suddenly out of notwhere for no "valid" reason I mean when he meet her, he get close and attired (pity her) by her because she was in despair and have some fighting spirit about destiny or wathever but he have meet the same type of people already a tons, so it was not a "valid" reason written for me he get smited about her suddenly for the same thing he have see again and again in others people already, if he can get mood swing for this type of thing why he not get it before in his travel with other people? (i talk all this before he know in deep about her and they get some commun past, i feel its was forced how he get mood swing by her immediately after they meet when she was nothing and a total stranger at the moment, very out of character for me the start of the romance)
Zarik0
2021-10-12 22:25:01 +0000 UTCDamni wished the ball sidestory wasnt cut short like that, as excited as i am for whats about to come, i really enjoyed this sidestory. One of the best youve implemented so far imo
Epeen
2021-06-03 13:12:07 +0000 UTC"the collapse buffet tables" collapse -> collapsed
Nahvis Gen
2021-05-22 09:26:53 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
nethernight11
2021-04-13 20:29:22 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-04-13 07:43:16 +0000 UTCDid not find any corrections, good job Puddles!
Steffen Thorup
2021-04-13 05:42:52 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2021-04-13 04:14:20 +0000 UTC
