Chapter 1725
Added 2021-04-07 17:59:30 +0000 UTCComments
"several quickly poses" quickly -> quick "Randidly when they left" they -> he "weapons smarly to" smarly -> smartly "the clothing they were." were [wearing] / were -> wore.
Nahvis Gen
2021-05-22 07:59:48 +0000 UTCAlso, I’m not certain if I missed it, but is randidly wearing dress shoes or is he barefoot?
SunderGoldmane
2021-04-14 14:34:23 +0000 UTCI feel he could subtly twist this as well. Something like “I assumed since you invited her here that you would deal with the fallout...”
SunderGoldmane
2021-04-14 14:24:29 +0000 UTCWhere is Vualla...
SunderGoldmane
2021-04-14 14:23:24 +0000 UTC"Clearly wanting for pray -> play" I believe
Umut Numanoglu
2021-04-08 13:36:33 +0000 UTCIm baffled why he go in the Ball in the first place, the Wick shit say he indepted to Randy and he fucking him with his machination And Randy go with the flow? he get enought damage just by Wick game, just ignore it and make it clear about his "relation" with the girl and its over (just a gossip who gonna die at the time) He really dont have reason to be in more shit and dangerous situation for nothing, him helping the girl for basically nothing and getting in the target/spotligh of all the big power is limit already, but him doing nothing about the Ball and going in another shit situation without thinking....again, can he fucking think about his "responsability" and his position a little, they have a plan with Octavius and co and him going off all time for no reason and getting in shit spotlight and dangerous situation by antagonize the top power when he know nothing and still dont look for infos and just take some time to understand how is the top of the nexus before acting in impulse is so zzzz
Zarik0
2021-04-08 10:56:38 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters
nethernight11
2021-04-07 20:30:40 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-04-07 20:01:11 +0000 UTCIt'll be interesting if this actually has some reason behind it or if its another example of how out of touch the higher ups in the nexus are. Thanks for the chapters!
Luciaron
2021-04-07 19:36:23 +0000 UTCprobably 'praise'
Luciaron
2021-04-07 19:35:37 +0000 UTC> Commandant Beigon Commandant Wick
George Hicken
2021-04-07 19:22:46 +0000 UTC> revealed here seafoam her
George Hicken
2021-04-07 19:19:59 +0000 UTC> clearly waiting for pray. praise? prey? I’m not sure what it should be but pray is wrong.
George Hicken
2021-04-07 19:18:49 +0000 UTCCorrections
PuDDleS4263
2021-04-07 18:00:01 +0000 UTC
