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Chapter 1416

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Thanks for the eggs.

Will, of the convictions forge.

I couldn't agree more, but I think part of the reason Vualla and Randidly work so well is that they are both very independant, so too much cooperation might ruin the dynamic a little bit. Kind of like what happened to Helen and Azriel a little bit during the second Tellus arc.

Christopher Sigurdson

Thanks for the chapter. Shouldn't Randidly take Derek with him to Dungeon, it would be good for many reasons. Oh, don't worry about the amount of chapters, as long as the chapters are longer it's the same as having more chapters

Umut Numanoglu

You know I thought i had you figured out. Eggs for 2 chapters Egg for 1 chapter. Now I am realizing that I need to pull all of your comments into pandas and build a model of your responses. Maybe I can reach a more true understanding.

Alexander Dupree

'Anni why she had agreed' Anni -> Annie

Corwin Amber

Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to the next one

Killer Pickle

Maybe you should consider setting a minimum number of words per week instead of chapters? That way you can be flexible with the words per chapter without changing the total work per week as much.

Untellable

Thanks for the chapter. That's some steamy flirting. *waves air at face* You might need a warning for younger audiences at the start of the chapter.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the eggs

nethernight11

Thanks for the chapter

Alexander Dupree

I loved this chapter. Beautifully done and brought a smile to my face reading the end.

Sir Sloth

Need moar vualla+randidly

Mohamed Raihaan

Corrections. Oh man, I have a lot of corrections to do on this week's break day...

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