Black Horda Ch.18 - Castle on a Hill (part3)
Added 2021-05-29 13:42:32 +0000 UTC
Lots of property destruction in this episode.
Fun fact: In my very first draft of this chapter Mr. Antler-kitty and Seth really went into an agreement to train. However, I found that that was very out of character for Seth (especially considering his actions in future chapters) so I rewrote the script. I think a life and death scenario is much better than another toned down training fight anyway. Finally, some blood!
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Woah. Thank you so much for the kind message, it made me tear up a little :). I'm super happy that you enjoy my comic this much! I will try to keep up with your expectations and I hope I can keep it interesting as the story moves forward. There are still a lot of things, be it world building, character developement or backstories, that I want to show :D
Cloverloy
2021-06-03 12:45:10 +0000 UTCI had been subscribed to your amazing webtoon for a while, but I JUST started reading it from episode one on. I spent hours of the day reading every single episode available, and then rushed over to your Patreon to offer support and snag some incredible rewards! Best decision everrrr! Your webtoon is—i-is...it’s...(*does not possess vocabulary necessary to accurately describe how I feel about your talent*) it’s absolutely most definitely for sure %100 one of the greatest fantasy works I have ever read! And I really enjoy the genre! Your world building, character development, and plot are just SO creative and engaging and positively FABULOUS. I just feel all itchy in my skin wanting to know what happens next! I haven’t felt that way about a series—be it tv, book, comic in SO long! I just kept admiring how damn creative you are! You manage SUCH a complex world, with a gagillion characters (*very real number. Mmmhm!*) and the arcs you create so that we can learn more about all of them are so well done, and complicated, and gorgeous. The story of the two brothers was wonderful! It was so riveting and emotional. Brava! Your art is lovely (*you deserve ALL the bragging rights x100,000,00!!*), your writing talent is next level (along with your art!), and your mind is a gem and you are brilliant. Okay. Sorry for my blubbering! I just spent ALL DAY immersed in your incredible world, so please forgive me if I’m acting like a manic fan girl! I think I AM a manic fan girl! Sorry not sorry you’re the beeeeeeeeest! Yay!
Carmen Otto
2021-06-02 06:34:31 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback! Yes, I can definitely see how it is hard to follow. A big portion of continuity gets lost when you try to rearrange the panels from a comic page into the scrolling format But I also think I could have made some more in between panels to show the movement of the characters. I hope I can improve that with the coming fights :)
Cloverloy
2021-05-30 06:19:39 +0000 UTCI like this chapter but I do have to critics one thing and that his the pacing and movement of the fight. I couldn't follow how it ended at all and the mid part also was also hard to follow. But in terms of expressing information in such few image panels it was really good. I love the story please keep it up =)
PigArmy
2021-05-30 00:29:06 +0000 UTC
