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Added 2018-11-25 05:57:04 +0000 UTCWoo, Naffur has been giving me trouble. Aside from being amusing to write, he was brought in for a reason. These next 3-4 chapters will be setting the stage for that, so I really want to get it right. I'll release it as a big batch tomorrow.
Although I'm tired, this is the last week. The goal is to write 15 more chapters before December and end around 50 on the month.
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jailbreak
2018-11-26 15:28:35 +0000 UTCIncluding donnyton, it was set up to do so well, but it has been left collecting dust...
CptJimmy
2018-11-26 04:02:06 +0000 UTCFour chapters straight on Naffur while everything else is going on? Ugh. Honestly Naffur sidestories are probably my least favorite parts to read at the moment. He seems completely inconsequential to the actual plot. Hopefully you do something interesting with these next few chapters if you’re actually setting the stage for whatever lies in the future, because as it stands he just seems like yet another throw away character that will be joining people like Hank and the kid who became the illusion champion. (See what I mean? We had numerous chapters on that kid and I can’t even remember his name now.)
Subliminary
2018-11-25 20:50:37 +0000 UTCI don't mind Naffur, but there better be a lot of interaction between him and Randidly when he gets back. The number of character you've created and then let a bit on the wayside is too many
CentaureHeart
2018-11-25 15:01:12 +0000 UTCNoooo. Not more chapters on Naffur. ;( It's such a drag reading about him.
2018-11-25 07:44:22 +0000 UTC^^^^
2018-11-25 06:17:35 +0000 UTCPlease dont be 4 chapters of naffur... hes interesting enough to check in on once in a while, but not with all the actually exciting stuff going on with our namesake character
Scruffleupagas
2018-11-25 06:09:15 +0000 UTC
