Sneak Peek: TWZJ Ch.2
Added 2024-06-26 12:43:05 +0000 UTCAlright, here’s our next snack of the month!
The Wandering Zeroes Journey is taking a bit to set up. Not to lack of interest but mostly because I can’t find the time I need to write as I want. The second chapter is under a lot of work as I redo a big chunk of it. The original draft was typed up years ago and going back to get it ready to publish has revealed that it needs a lot of fat cutting, extra seasoning, and change to the taste I originally had in mind. If I remember correctly, I’m about 13K+ in already; it shouldn’t be more than another month before it’s ready to be platted.
To describe the following chapters better, I would say they are all connected as the Prologue- Prologue: Ordinarius Stella Nubilum in Misericordia. The real story and adventure doesn’t start until Chapter 5, Act 1: Where The Winds Guide Us.
In a nutshell: the month’s been exhausting. I’ve been overexerting myself to the point of feeling sick and fatigued after every shift. The business is good but damn, is it killing me. Thankfully I’m almost done training a new hire that should ease up my workload once they’re set. Hopefully, I can get back my mojo and zeal. I really want to get into my adventures with Touma in the land of Freedom!
Enjoy the taste. Hopefully, I can get it served up soon.
Comments
Poor Touma, 1st time meeting the rest of the crew and he's already giving them (unintentionally) the impression of being a shameless pervert. And getting a healthy dose of head trauma while at it. He simply can't get a rest, can he? Also, is it just me or is that cat Misaki in feline form? There's even the callback to the starry eyes and she has blonde fur as well. Beidou's and Touma's first interaction was great. You depicted her in a way that made it obvious why and how she earned the respect and love of her crew. She's very self-confident, but at the same time doesn't come across as being arrogant. She isn't afraid of speaking her mind, but has the tact to be soft when the situation requires it. Her sense of humor is great, too. And you nailed the way she speaks. It sounds really informal and pirate-ish (is that even a word?). However, her most appealing trait is the fact that she's basically everyone's big sister. Listening to their troubles, giving timely advice, supporting them both physically and emotionally, cracking jokes to lighten the mood, all the while respecting their personal space. And that wasn't any different with Kamijou. He surely deserves it after all he's been through (and will be through, given his misfortune). He always acts like a big brother to others, so it's only fair he gets a chance to be in the receiving end and be pampered a little bit. Anyway, keep up the great work
Juan Teixeira
2024-06-29 17:18:06 +0000 UTCBruh, neither Patreon nor Outlook notified me about this release 😭 I shall read it asap
Juan Teixeira
2024-06-28 18:41:38 +0000 UTCI read it and what can I say. It's just peak man, plain and simple. To the emotional moments to fun moments. I think this is a amazing way to "INTRODUCE" Touma to the Crux. I like the way this preview play out with Touma and Beidou chemistry building itself, The biggest highlight of the preview. Just vibes. I can just feel the love and care man. Can't wait for chapter 2 to completely come out. I be waiting. Keep up the good work bro love to see it.
Mr. Kean
2024-06-27 07:12:52 +0000 UTC
