Plant Food 134
Added 2018-09-15 03:24:11 +0000 UTCI ended up rewriting the dialog for this page a few times. On one hand, it no longer has Neriah directly confirming she's spent the vast majority of her time down there in a pleasured daze (still the case), on the other hand changing the dialog closed a minor plot hole.. 20-30 pages from now... while creating a new issue for volume II. :P
An easily solved issue, granted. I also added some dialog to the end of 133, as I realize Neriah never said her name during this entire scene. That was because I didn't think of a name for her ("Voice") until seeing the concept art, as it were. That's usually when I name grim mini characters as well, as it were. Hrm, I wonder if folk are interested in hearing more about that process~
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I think common sense would be to not alert your captures that your magic is back
maninblack
2018-09-16 00:42:17 +0000 UTCI am *very* curious what the "disposal" process is, can't wait for the next page!
lollerskates
2018-09-15 07:11:01 +0000 UTCThis looks promising... *rubs hands together*
MCGrey
2018-09-15 03:53:48 +0000 UTCNaming process? Do tell, I hate it myself
Perniciousducks
2018-09-15 03:46:15 +0000 UTCI'd be happy to hear about that naming process
Tokamara
2018-09-15 03:32:19 +0000 UTC
