Chapter 14 is up
Added 2025-05-11 14:30:35 +0000 UTCThis one required quite a lot more rewriting. I'm changing Mosavi's personality. Not too much, but enough to give him a bit more depth as a character while also making him a little more likeable.
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Looking forward to it. In the original.. at the end he was almost pleasant.. but before that a real sadistic SOB.
Marcwolf
2025-05-11 16:15:29 +0000 UTC
