ADT Chapter 32
Added 2022-01-27 18:22:18 +0000 UTCEDIT: Now available for Dragon Hatchlings. Enjoy!
Also, I got the Discord issue fixed. :) Discord is a better way to message/talk to me if you have comments or questions. Anyway, enjoy the chapter!
============
Hi all,
Here it is, and I'm sorry that I'm a day late. I promise I'll do better in the future now that I'm finally all caught up on editing. I've been editing three chapters at once and my dyslexia makes it take a while.
Enjoy!
Feel free to drop a comment and let me know what you think. Discord is better if possible, but here on Patreon works too.
Thank you for your patronage. :)
-Antiproton
Comments
Since I'm reading on a device, it's definitely screen time!
Toodles McGhee
2022-03-02 04:08:23 +0000 UTCπ I don't mind the typo callouts at all. Another patron messaged me with a few but I haven't gotten around to correcting them yet. In fact, I might add a line about pointing out typos to future Patreon posts. You know, do the crowd-sourced thing. π€ Glad to hear you loved it. Beth does have a mother too, though she hasn't gotten much 'screen' time... yet.
2022-03-01 18:24:53 +0000 UTCWait...maybe something with chains?? Also, found it interesting that courage is being sacred and "doing it" anyway...so a fornicating nun is courageous? Or are there addenda which clarify said nun's act is courage only in certain circumstances, like only when done as a demonstration of technique in a marriage counseling session? I'm new, so please let me know if pointing out typos is annoying, or especially my tendency to point them out with a restatement of how they struck me in the story flow. If it would be appreciated, I can make sure my typo call-outs all have typos in them tutu indicate solidarity?
Toodles McGhee
2022-03-01 18:06:33 +0000 UTCGreat chapter!! I'm so glad that Alana has a mother, since none of the others - Beth, Taloni, Rachel, Kendra, Selene, Sarah - do; this would have to be subtitled "Seven Brides sans Seven Mothers" otherwiseπ Also, this "spooking position" you write of sounds intriguing - I'm fairly certain it came about as a typo, but perhaps your fertile imagination can come up with a erotic pose it is used to describe? My best attempt was something involving a broom handle, which certainly spooks me, but is not at all eroticβΉοΈ Longtime fan, glad to find you here!
Toodles McGhee
2022-03-01 18:04:33 +0000 UTC
