My Neighbor - Part 8
Added 2024-06-17 11:37:03 +0000 UTCSorry for the delay folks. I got stuck between
Comments
I'm starting to root for John to get Emily. I think he needs a girl like her in his life. And I think Louise needs to feel what she is making him feel.
Wendy Thorne
2024-09-18 15:07:36 +0000 UTCBiggest risk John could insert unknowing to Louise and scenario is replacing birth control pills with some or all placebos, depending on circum
WILLYBOY
2024-07-13 17:43:02 +0000 UTCOther smaller guy as surprise for initial anal more forceful for Tony and realistic due to Tony size which should have been much more painful.
WILLYBOY
2024-07-11 17:12:07 +0000 UTCI second h mon, birth control change discussion or action coming.
WILLYBOY
2024-07-11 17:09:19 +0000 UTCLouise is ready for DP, Tony needs to bring another guy on
h mon
2024-06-26 00:52:02 +0000 UTCNot my chapter. Butt stuff doesn't do much for me, I expected the birthday celebration this chapter, and I think the lack of interactions between the husband and wife were a missed opportunity. There were hardly any of the reconnecting, comparing, teasing between the couple that I expected between the weekend and birthday. Feels like we are time-skipping important elements
James
2024-06-22 12:43:26 +0000 UTCI'm still waiting for the "Coming off the BCP" and new level of risk
neegan
2024-06-21 02:50:33 +0000 UTCFantastic story and well written! Now the real turning point comes where John begin realize that L is T women yet he canβt admit it. The talks between L and J absolutely hot but not enough of it like in the beginning of story and I kind of miss that element. Also sex scenes are super hot. I would like to see tony become more meaningful to L and encouraged by John to be her actual boyfriend. I want L to fall for tony emotionally I also want to see John willing to do extremely erotic things to satisfy them both like eating cream pies maybe cleaning tony . The humiliation part is good but I donβt think it would be wise to go too far that road . Last thing is pregnancy risk issue which is highly intense I want for L to play Johns mind with it . Maybe for her to stop taking pills but the best thing would be for her to convince John and make him think that this is his idea Excellent work πΏ
Migmig
2024-06-17 21:15:54 +0000 UTCI really dislike these characters at this point.
TimothyS
2024-06-17 18:47:49 +0000 UTC
