My Neighbor - Part 2
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Comments
Thank you!
Antarctica77
2023-11-21 19:43:38 +0000 UTCI write in this genre what I think people will like.
Antarctica77
2023-11-21 19:43:29 +0000 UTCThe whole premise is a little over the top, but it's a fun fap story. There is some hot writing, the shower scene was great. I like the foreshadowing here of things getting out of hand (the "knock me up" stuff). You definitely have a real theme to your writing - wife falls for ugly guy with a huge cock. But hey, as they say, write what you know.
RD
2023-11-21 16:30:03 +0000 UTCThat's a fun cameo with Dan. And the chapter itself is superb. The shower scene is the hottest I've ever read - you totally nailed it!
Shando Fenindra
2023-11-17 20:23:33 +0000 UTC
