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Book 2 - Chapter 5

Brin pushed from a crouch up to his feet, feeling the burning in his muscles. “One.” He’d done sets of ten of these before System Day, and before he’d been bed-ridden for more than a week. His legs still tweaked from the wounds he’d taken, but he was determined to push through. Five. He would definitely do five.

Meanwhile, Marksi stood right next to him, holding a stone in his little gecko-hands. He didn’t really have the body shape for squats; he still had the long snake tail, but he wanted to try anyway. He curled up and down with his rock, determined to do whatever Brin was doing..

Brin squatted again, and pushed up against the yoke. Davi had made these things, based off the yokes they put on their ox, and weighted them with heavy buckets full of iron tools. They were pretty clever, but mostly they were infernal instruments from the pits of hell and Davi had a sick mind.

“Two,” said Brin as he rose up. He went back down. He strained to get back up, and his muscles just couldn’t make it happen. He pushed anyway, determined to make it happen. He’d done sets of ten at this weight. He could at least do three. He got halfway up, and his legs started to feel like they were going to collapse.

He felt his load lessen a bit, Davi was behind him helping a bit, and he pushed the rest of the way up. “Three!”

He dropped the yoke and started walking it off, pacing back and forth in front of the Pimental family barn and sucking in huge gulps of air. Marksi dropped his rock and collapsed on the ground, although it was hard to know if he was actually exhausted or just playing it up.

Through training, you have increased the following attribute:

Strength +1

“Nice! I just got a Strength. It’s been a while since I got one of those,” said Brin.

“I haven’t gotten one in a long time either,” said Davi. “I don’t know if I ever will, not if I spend all day learning from Jeffrey. You can actually lose attributes, did you know that? You’ll lose Strength if you start being really lazy all the time.”

“You’re not being lazy, Davi.”

“Sure feels like it,” said Davi. He walked over to Brin’s yoke, but didn’t even bother changing the weight. He just put it on and started pumping out squats. “We just sit around all day. I thought I would be learning songs, but we hardly do that at all.”

He knocked out the first ten squats like they were nothing, but kept going, and started to slow in the twenties. “I guess… I just thought… it would be different.”

“I don’t see why,” said Brin. “I don’t know all that much, but I do know that there’s way more to music that most people know. Theory and such.”

“Even that… would be ok…” Davi strained to hit number forty, but pushed up and then set the yoke on the ground with a sigh. “Jeffrey doesn’t care about theory. He assigns me homework from a book, but I don’t even know if he knows what’s in it. He barely cares about music. All he wants to talk about is manipulating people.”

“Wait, seriously?”

“Yeah,” said Davi, wiping his face with a towel. "It feels gross. Why can't the music be enough?"

Curious, Brin used [Inspect].

Davi Pimental

Human

Bard

Level 7

Description: Davi is your best friend and one of the three ‘golden children’ of Hammon’s Bog. [Bard] gives him a point in each attribute per level, plus the free point in being human. He’s probably putting all his free points into Strength. If he hasn’t hit the third threshold yet, he’s very close.

He hadn’t been expecting all the extra information, especially the description. The “probably” was also worrying. Yeah, he assumed that’s what Davi was doing, but he didn’t know for sure. Was the System just giving back his own impressions? If so, what good was the Skill at all if it was just telling him things he already knew? On the other hand, he hadn’t known Davi’s precise level, and hadn’t known that it gave one point to each attribute per level. He would’ve assumed high Dexterity and low Vitality.

“What kind of Skills do you have?”

“With [Bard] even the Skills are annoying,” said Davi. “The base of the Class is [Inflame the Spirit]. The soul is flame and you are its keeper. Jeffrey says all the Skills are like that. The descriptions are useless. That one lets you screw with people’s emotions. The other main Skill is [Color of Music] You are an artist. Music is your paint and words or your brush. It’s a bonus to learning instruments and memorizing songs. Not that I spend any time doing any of that.”

Brin used [Inspect] again.

Davi Pimental

Human

Bard

Level 7

Description: Davi is your best friend and one of the three ‘golden children’ of Hammon’s Bog. [Bard] gives him a point in each attribute per level, plus the free point in being human. He’s probably putting all his free points into Strength. If he hasn’t hit the third threshold yet, he’s very close.

Class Skills:

Inflame the Spirit The soul is flame and you are its keeper. Empowers a Bard to alter or enhance the emotional state of his audience.

[Color of Music] You are an artist. Music is your paint and words or your brush. A bonus to learning instruments and memorizing songs.

Alert! [Inspect] leveled up! 2 -> 5

Well that was interesting. Apparently [Inspect] would update with information that he learned from other means, and he’d get a lot of Skill experience for it. This must be what Hogg meant when he said that identifying [Witches] would help him level up the Skill.

“Hey, I’m trying to figure out [Inspect],” said Brin. “Would you mind giving me the exact phrasing of your [Color of Music] Skill?”

“Sure,” said Davi. “You have a largely increased ability to learn to play musical instruments. You have a perfect memory for the melody and lyrics of any song you’ve ever heard. I even remember that stupid ‘Sweet Home in the Boglands’ song you made up.”

“That song is a work of art,” said Brin.

He checked [Inspect] on Davi one last time, and sure enough, the last part had updated.

[Color of Music] You are an artist. Music is your paint and words or your brush. You have a largely increased ability to learn to play musical instruments.You have a perfect memory for the melody and lyrics of any song you’ve ever heard.

“Ok, now your turn,” said Davi.

“You want to hear about [Glasser]. Sure! The first Skill is–”

“No, um… I want to hear about the other one. Zilly says she thought it was [Scab Eater] and that she was wrong but she thinks she was close.”

Brin didn’t really want to talk about this. Not for any particular reason, just because he didn’t. At the same time, he didn’t want people going around saying he’d picked [Scab Eater].

“Wait, when were you talking to Zilly? Isn’t that kind of hard now unless you're formally courting?” asked Brin.

“We’re the only two Rare Classers in our age group, and the first two Rares for three years, not counting you. People are practically throwing us together. Now stop changing the subject.”

Brin sat on the bench, and started curling with the weighted milk jugs they’d started using as dumbbells. “It was [Scarred One],” he admitted.

Marksi sat next to him, trying to imitate the curls. His arms were too stubby to copy the motion, so he held a small stone and rocked back and forth.

Davi sat next to them. “What was it like?”

“It was awesome.”

Davi raised his eyebrows in shock.

Sancta Solia, it was incredible. I was so strong. I felt like I could do anything. Not just physically, although that was more than enough. All the bad things like sadness and self-doubt just slid away; I couldn’t feel them any more. I had magic that would hold my body together no matter how much it got cut. The attributes were insane, I hit the forth threshold in Strengh and Vitality. I couldn’t feel pain, it felt like excitement and fire, and I actually leveled up the more I got hurt. And getting hurt is the one thing I’m good at. I was over level twenty by the end of the night.”

“Twenty levels in one night? That’s impossible.”

“It was a difficult night,” said Brin. He switched to the other arm.

“Why’d you give it up?”

“I didn’t like who I was becoming.”

“But so much power… And you were controlling it. I could tell something was off, but you more or less acted the same way you always did.”

“I was acting, though.”

Davi grunted. Not a yes or a no, just his way of saying he would think about it some more before giving his opinion.

“Why did you take [Bard]?” asked Brin. “I thought for sure you wanted [Farmer].”

“I got offered [Farmer]. Still might take it. But the [Bard] made a good point: Why not just try it out? Not everyone gets the chance to take a Rare Class. I could just try it. If I end up not liking it, I can just reset and I’ll be no worse off, unless I lose a year to [Child]. Even that wouldn’t hurt me in the long run, though.”

“And what do you think so far?” asked Brin.

“I told you. It sucks,” said Davi.

Brin stood up. “You know what? I want to hear you play.”

“What?”

“If you’re going to reset your Class anyway, I want to make sure I get to hear you play as a [Bard] at least once. I’m going to run and fetch my lute. You go get yours and meet me back here. Your bull. What’s his name? He can be our audience.”

“Poco? He’s a bull,” said Davi.

“Even beasts can appreciate good music,” said Brin.

“Too bad neither of us can make any of that. More likely he’ll get sick of us and chase us off his lawn.”

“Then that will be extra motivation to do well,” said Brin. “Go on.”

“Fine,” Davi said with a frown.

Brin threw Marksi on his shoulders and dashed back home to grab his lute. He ignored how shaky the squats had made his legs and ran the entire way in a full sprint. When he got to his room, he grabbed his lute and then looked at Marksi.

“Hey. I want you to do something for me. Remember that feeling you get when we went to Gustaff’s house or whenever I visit the Peck’s? I want you to tell me if you get that same feeling around Poco the bull or around the Pimentals.”

Marksi twitched his tail for no.

“Just tell me if you feel anything like that, even if it’s just a little bit. Can you do that?”

Yes.

“Good! Then let’s go!” Lute in hand, Marksi on his shoulder, Brin took off again at a full sprint.

When he got back, Davi was already leaning against Poco’s fence, strumming his lute idly. The massive bull stood behind him, peering down curiously. When Brin approached the bull gave him a fair dose of side-eye and then snorted and turned around.

Brin fired off an [Inspect].

Poco. A bull. This one is larger and smarter than most, no doubt due to bonuses from his owners. The Pimentals are [Farmers], probably some kind of [Animal Husbandry] variant, and they’ve clearly used an enormous amount of time and Skill to make this animal as powerful as possible. He is probably at least ten times stronger than you.

Out of curiosity, Brin also [Inspected] Marksi.

Marksi. A dragonling. Marksi is very sneaky, and can use illusion magic to change his color as camouflage. He has near-human intelligence from his draconic heritage, something that will only increase as he gets older and more powerful. He can eat beast cores to trigger evolutions and increase his growth.

Wow. He’d already guessed most of that, and everyone had told Brin that Marksi was a dragon, but it was insane to see it written out like that.

Brin sat next to Davi in the grass, leaning against the fence and panting.

“Did you run the entire way?” asked Davi.

“I… was just that excited… to hear a real [Bard],” said Brin.

Davi snorted. “Yeah, right.”

“Play something,” Brin urged.

“Fine.”

Davi started a song Brin had heard before, it was an epic ballad, one that Jeffrey really liked to play. When Jeffrey played the song, Brin always felt grand emotions, like he was the hero in the story. He felt the bitter agony of defeat and then the blazing glory of victory, so keenly that it nearly brought him to tears.

Davi launched into the first verse, and a wave of emotion rammed into Brin. They were all the right emotions, setting the scene by describing the grandeur of the kingdom that the hero defended, but at the same time it was wrong. Foreign. The emotions were clawing into him, trying to overwhelm him, trying to force him to feel something he didn’t want to feel.

Marksi jumped off Brin’s shoulders and ran around behind him, as if hiding from the sound.

“Stop!” Brin shouted. He jumped to his feet, furious, but at the shocked dismay on Davi’s face, he forced himself to take a deep breath. Then another.

“I don’t want the emotion stuff. You need to practice that some more with Jeffrey before you unleash it on someone. I just want to hear the music. Can you do that?”

“S–Sure,” said Davi.

He started over, and this time it was just music.

Davi was pretty good, all things considered. He played slowly and the song wasn’t complicated, but he never missed a note and his rough, deep voice wasn’t off pitch. The ballad was sung in the High Frenarian, and Davi tried to put on a posh, big-city accent to make it sound authentic. That’s what was cool here, but it sort of hurt to hear a country kid like Davi trying to sound like that. It felt wrong. Not break Davi’s lute over his head wrong like the emotional manipulation stuff had been. It was sad, honestly.

Brin played a few songs he knew from recreating old Earth songs on the lute. He didn’t bother with lyrics, just played the melodies as best he could. They alternated, Davi playing a song, and then him. Lastly, Brin played ‘Sweet Home in the Boglands’, complete with the nonsense translations, which sent them both into hysterics.

When they calmed down, Davi started into something completely different. Something soft and slow. A mourning song. About halfway through, he started sneaking in some of his emotional power, but this time it was just barely there, faint and restrained.

It didn’t hurt going in, except in the way that real sadness hurts. Brin had plenty of things to be sad about. This time, he thought about his earth parents attending his funeral, and wondered if the song they played would sound something like this.

Brin rested his head against the fence and closed his eyes, weeping. The long was pretty long, and Davi played it slow. Brin waited patiently, and just let it happen.

When the song wrapped up, Davi waited in silence.

“My mother was a [Witch],” said Brin. If his suspicions were correct, he’d need to have this conversation someday. Better to have it now, before he knew for sure. “She tried to betray Arcaena and got caught in Travin’s Bog. That’s how I ended up there.”

“I thought you couldn’t remember,” said Davi.

“I remember a bit,” said Brin. It stung to lie to his friend, because he couldn’t remember any of Aberthol’s life. He only knew this from running into his undead father.

“I don’t know what I’d do if my mom turned out to be a [Witch]. I don’t think I could bear it,” said Davi.

“Your mom is one of the nicest people I’ve ever met. If she turned out to be a [Witch], all that would mean is that not all [Witches] are evil.”

Davi grunted.

“Thanks for the song, Davi. It was really something. Hey, did you mention that you learned to play some other instruments?”

Davi brightened. “I can play the fiddle. Want to hear?”

“Yes!”

“Hold on, let me grab it,” said Davi, and dashed away.

When he was out of sight, Brin said to Marksi, “Well? Anything?”

The snake twitched his tail for no.

Brin eyed the bull. It was still pretending to ignore them, face turned the other way, but still where he was able to watch them from the corner of his eye.

Brin strummed a chord, trying to get the right sound. He’d never played this one before, but he knew it by heart. It was really catchy. ‘Has got it going on’ didn’t really translate, so he had to make some adjustments, but he was satisfied it would do the trick well enough.

He sang. “Davi’s mom is really super fair, I want to run my fingers through her hair! I want her in my bed, I don’t care if I end up dead! I know it must be wrong, but I’m in love with–”

The bull called out angrily and turned, pointing his horns towards Brin menacingly.

Brin laughed. “Gotcha.”

The bull took another step forward.

Brin paled, and waved his hands in apology. “No, no! That song was a joke! I was just kidding! Please don’t kill me, boss.”

The bull snorted, and then stomped his hoof on the ground. If he was a Wuxia character, he’d be saying “kowtow before me five times.”

Honestly, it couldn’t hurt. Brin didn’t have anything like pride. He bowed his head to the ground. “A thousand apologies, great master.”

The bull huffed, then turned his head.

Brin put his head to the ground again. “This one thanks you for your mercy, great master.”

He turned around to find Davi standing there with his fiddle. “So… what’s all that about?”

“N-Nothing,” said Brin.

He fired one last [Inspect] off at Poco.

Poco. A bull. A [Witch’s] familiar. He is very defensive of Davi’s mom. She is almost certainly his [Witch].

Alert! [Inspect] leveled up! 5 -> 7

Davi played the fiddle. He was pretty good, and seemed a lot more comfortable with instrument than he ever did with the lute.

When he was done, he said, “Hey, it’s about supper time. Why don’t we wash up and you can come eat with us.”

Comments

can we get lmfao davi ft. lil marc?

js

Great chapter and I’m glad to see Davi again- also the song is in my head

George R

His levels got resetted to lvl 1

Rubeno

Oh did he not keep his attributes from Scarred? Makes sense I spose, just didnt think of it.

BubblyGhost

Aaaand she would do something nasty to protect herself or her family.

Rubeno

Kowtow 5 times ?? Numbers are magic in Chinese tradition, It's either 3 or 9, multiples of 3 are what's it about, the number 4 is is unlucky majorly so, in most Chinese skyscrapers flor "4" doesn't exist, just like there are no rooms 13 or 113 or 213 on most cruise ships in the west. (or a 113 dinning room table).

SlaveToMyWhims

damn i thought brin was being a asshole and accusing everyone but now i am the pikachu face. i am literally the pikachu face rn

zakaka

I’m a shit head… I’d ask her straight up

FlawlessMovement

What happened with his levels and Summon Sound skill when he changed classes? When MC changed classes he lost all levels and Hogg should have gained Summon Hard Light at lowest development phase so he will need to upgrade his base skill with levels...probably? It's kind of super vague tbh. That said hard light is very strong theoretically. In Halo it's used as a power blade and as a almost indestructible shield. Sonyeah, a lot to exore with this ability.

Rubeno

The impression I got from his conversation with Perris I get the sense that most of them live and die as snakes. They only become something more if they strive, face hardship and or gain experience, and eat cores. I get the sense that Perris was granted a snake too, but he coddled his and so the snake died young, happy and weak.

Dash of Salt

Real quick thought but Hogg is going to be a monster when he figure everything about his skill right? He's upgraded it to hell and back before it evolved and now he can make hard light that should be able to be in any possible shape and color. Even without the sensory ability he should now be basically a summoner and able to spoof Gilgamesh from fate once he master's his ability.

Authorii

Stacy’s mom has got it going on she’s all I want, been waitin’ for so long .. Oh! yeah, well set up likely reveal. Hogg’s statements about not all witches being evil and hospitality fit well with Davi’s mom’s character. Her presence in the storyline has been weak to nonexistent since before Brin learned that information so I didn’t see it coming until Brin started Phishing. I wasn’t sure who until he told the story about his mother.

Colin Love

I hope Davi pioneers country music

Leaf

I mean one of the SEVEN witches so... yet she is middle aged, leads rather idyllic life and intelligent bull is too obvious for in world witch hunter to really not notice it's intelligence so it should rule her out.

Rubeno

Country roades, take me HOOME! MOUNTAIN MAMA!! AAAA

Rubeno

I'm curious how will MC solve problem of invitation. Bull being too inteligent is kind of too obvious though for perosn as experienced as Hogg to not notice something unusual. I believe that Dave's mother haven't betrayed the village as she seems to be leading rather idyllic life as middle aged woman. Witch that can age is either very scary or content with their actual lives

Rubeno

Thank you for the Chapter! "Inflame the Spirit The soul is flame..." -> "[Inflame the Spirit] The soul is flame..."

Iulian V

surprised theres no inspect level ups to go with the last notification

Pisces the Nose

If Marksi is a dragonling what happens with older dragonlings who remain lazy then? There was a lot of snakes in the pond.

Rubeno

Witch this Witch that. It's Bards that are equally scary if not scarier! Each of them are basically mind benders but potentially without having using magic which makes effects less susceptible to be resisted and be less obvious. How are bards not carefully regulated? What keeps them in line? EDIT: Albeit Bard would make awesome team with Illusionist though... Imagine Davi invoking terror in MC victims in order to sway them from using anti illusion measures. Well, as long as Davi gets over his squeamishness.

Rubeno

Thank you!

Andrew

And now he is invited into her house to take her offer of food. Think he makes an excuse to get out of it? Also, would be funny if Hogg didn’t even suspect her. Although Brin hasn’t exactly confirmed it is her yet.

Eric M

Davis mom has got it going on. Eating her food definitely won’t go wrong

RedInkQuill

Damn, definitely didn't even think of the bull even when they started mentioning familiars. The animal husbandry really was a good cover.

MO

That twist actually surprised me.

Ayaria

*shocked pikachu face* I only partially expected that. Nice twist! :D

BerciTheBeast

This was funny as fuck way to let us know about the witch

Ananiash

I hate you right now... I have that stupid song running through my head and I don't even remember the whole of it. Just the final chorus.

Bob of Doom

Oh shit Davi's mom's got it going on?!

Nyroe


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