Part 3 - Chapter 5.5
Added 2023-07-16 04:50:37 +0000 UTCYou deserved a stat screen after that last chapter. Here it is.
Information
Name Brin isu Yambul
Age 13
Race Human
Class Child of Travin's Bog
Level 1
Attributes
Strength 36
Dexterity 31
Vitality 30
Magic 15
Mental Control 19
Will 30
Titles
Survivor of Travin's Bog Locked
Traveler Locked
Otherworlder Locked
Achievements
Warbound (Epic)
You are born for war. You defeated at least 10 enemy soldiers before unlocking your System.
+10% Strength. +10% Vitality. +10% Will. +50% experience from melee combat.
Blessing of the Hidden Guardian (Rare)
You have been seen and accepted by the one who lays beneath.
Strong I (Common)
You have reached 26 Strength.
+10% speed with Strength-intensive activities. +10% Strength attribute growth.
Dextrous I (Common)
You have reached 26 Dexterity.
+10% speed with Dexterity-intensive activities. +10% Dexterity attribute growth. +10% Dexterity
Lively I (Common)
You have reached 26 Vitality.
+10% recovery from wounds. +10% stamina. +10% Vitality attribute growth.
Disciplined I (Common)
You have reached 26 Will
+10% spell power. +10% skill power. +10% Will attribute growth.
Workhorse (Rare)
You work like a horse. You have earned many attribute achievements before unlocking your System.
+1 Strength per level, +1 Dexterity per level, +1 Will per level, +1 Vitality per level
Skills
Know Whatβs Real
You have the ability to understand when something you experience or remember is real, and when it is an illusion or dream. Hearing increased. Vision in darkness increased. You can now approximate the value of things.
Oaths
Oath of the Quest Survivor
You have sworn never to speak of how you became the beneficiary of a Quest
Comments
I think it's where it needs to be. He got to 28 before he earned thief,and the 10% increase from thief (which transferred to dextrous) puts him at 31
Miles English
2023-07-16 21:02:09 +0000 UTCShouldnβt dexterity give him 20% with the thief thing?
SinCinnamon
2023-07-16 14:05:53 +0000 UTCWouldn't that then also decrease his dexterity down to 28-ish? You will also need to go back and change the 3rd to last paragraph of chapter 5 for the above change from Disclancerβs point.
Eric M
2023-07-16 07:22:43 +0000 UTCHere to help, loving the story. Also I remember the word I wanted! Retcon! Had to put edit instead. My mental stat failed me π
Disclancer
2023-07-16 05:30:02 +0000 UTCYeah, you've pointed out a pretty important inconsistency. I'm going to edit, thank you.
Miles English
2023-07-16 05:23:43 +0000 UTCThere's certainly a difference in format between some achievements saying +X% Stat and others saying +X% Stat growth. Might be advisable to add +X% Stat to the threshold achievements for clarity and consistency as an edit?
Disclancer
2023-07-16 05:22:34 +0000 UTCSo I'm a little confused. The threshold achievements do add a 10% modifier to his Stat scores then? I thought they just increased growth and application (in broad terms)?
Disclancer
2023-07-16 05:19:10 +0000 UTCWhere are the extra stat multipliers coming from? I only see the 10% from warbound
eternalephemera
2023-07-16 05:10:51 +0000 UTCMiles English
2023-07-16 05:03:47 +0000 UTC39, he's very close it's 26 for the first then 50% of that for second
MagicWafflez
2023-07-16 04:58:23 +0000 UTCWhat amount was required for 2nd attribute achievements again?
BubblyGhost
2023-07-16 04:53:05 +0000 UTC