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Part 3 - Chapter 5.5

You deserved a stat screen after that last chapter. Here it is.

Information

Name      Brin isu Yambul

Age         13

Race        Human

Class        Child of Travin's Bog

Level         1

Attributes

Strength     36

Dexterity    31

Vitality       30

Magic        15

Mental Control     19

Will            30

Titles

Survivor of Travin's Bog       Locked

Traveler                                Locked

Otherworlder                       Locked

Achievements

Warbound (Epic)

You are born for war. You defeated at least 10 enemy soldiers before unlocking your System.

+10% Strength. +10% Vitality. +10% Will. +50% experience from melee combat.

Blessing of the Hidden Guardian (Rare)

You have been seen and accepted by the one who lays beneath.

Strong I (Common)

You have reached 26 Strength.

+10% speed with Strength-intensive activities. +10% Strength attribute growth.

Dextrous I (Common)

You have reached 26 Dexterity.

+10% speed with Dexterity-intensive activities. +10% Dexterity attribute growth. +10% Dexterity

Lively I (Common)

You have reached 26 Vitality.

+10% recovery from wounds. +10% stamina. +10% Vitality attribute growth.

Disciplined I (Common)

You have reached 26 Will

+10% spell power. +10% skill power. +10% Will attribute growth.

Workhorse (Rare)

You work like a horse. You have earned many attribute achievements before unlocking your System.

+1 Strength per level, +1 Dexterity per level, +1 Will per level, +1 Vitality per level

Skills

Know What’s Real

You have the ability to understand when something you experience or remember is real, and when it is an illusion or dream. Hearing increased. Vision in darkness increased. You can now approximate the value of things.

Oaths

Oath of the Quest Survivor

You have sworn never to speak of how you became the beneficiary of a Quest

Comments

I think it's where it needs to be. He got to 28 before he earned thief,and the 10% increase from thief (which transferred to dextrous) puts him at 31

Miles English

Shouldn’t dexterity give him 20% with the thief thing?

SinCinnamon

Wouldn't that then also decrease his dexterity down to 28-ish? You will also need to go back and change the 3rd to last paragraph of chapter 5 for the above change from Disclancer’s point.

Eric M

Here to help, loving the story. Also I remember the word I wanted! Retcon! Had to put edit instead. My mental stat failed me 😜

Disclancer

Yeah, you've pointed out a pretty important inconsistency. I'm going to edit, thank you.

Miles English

There's certainly a difference in format between some achievements saying +X% Stat and others saying +X% Stat growth. Might be advisable to add +X% Stat to the threshold achievements for clarity and consistency as an edit?

Disclancer

So I'm a little confused. The threshold achievements do add a 10% modifier to his Stat scores then? I thought they just increased growth and application (in broad terms)?

Disclancer

Where are the extra stat multipliers coming from? I only see the 10% from warbound

eternalephemera

Miles English

39, he's very close it's 26 for the first then 50% of that for second

MagicWafflez

What amount was required for 2nd attribute achievements again?

BubblyGhost


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