[Hereafter] Chapter CXXXVI: A Tale for Someone
Added 2024-02-05 06:19:06 +0000 UTCI had the idea pretty early on that I wanted to introduce an unaffiliated Master into London, since the Mage's Association being right there made it so easy to do. I wasn't sure if it was going to be an OC or not until it was time to bring him in, but considering the guy has no screentime in any canon materials and has little more than still shot cameos in the various anime, in a way, he's more OC than not.
So, what do you think? Did I stick the landing? Do you think this is going to work out as more interesting than Nursery Rhyme's canon stuff in London, or is it too contrived?
EDIT: Moving down all the way. 3/17/24
Comments
“It runs in the family, doesn’t it?” ...the tsundere attitude and/or the hot-blooded(ness) that Tokiomi and/or Rin would (initially, in the latter case) bemoan the lack of 'elegance' in their personal conduct?
TimeDiver
2024-02-06 03:15:39 +0000 UTCI could definitely see that, or her brother calling her that to tease/troll her.
s22132
2024-02-05 18:10:55 +0000 UTCI like the reveal of the mage; I think it will work well. Hmm, seems that Taylor doesn't like Jackie very much as of now, but I still hold out hope for my favorite Assassin. :) Thanks for the new chapter.
s22132
2024-02-05 18:10:21 +0000 UTCIf Rika is caled mommy by Jack, will she refer to herself as a MILF?
Gifted-Monster
2024-02-05 06:33:24 +0000 UTC
