Plagiarism Video Update + Remastered First Half
Added 2023-10-23 20:37:54 +0000 UTC
Hello Freakers,
The next video, "Plagiarism and You(Tube)" is EXCRUCIATINGLY close to done - we even have a name for it now! I'd love to show you the near-final draft, but I don't want to risk alerting the subjects before the video is public. So instead, now is the chance to show off how much a video develops as I work on it.
Linked above is the final version of the first 80 minutes. You'll notice a heck of a lot of changes, the main ones being:
- Tons of reshot live action segments
- Part 2 (Iilluminaughtii) is now part 3, because...
- An entire new part 2 has been made, a case study on the Cinemassacre plagiarism story!
- The Iilluminaughtii segment is also no longer horrifically long and painful, and is more focused, with tons of rewrites.
Somehow, this draft is 12 minutes shorter than the last one, but contains a ton more material. I don't even know how that happened. For people who already saw the first version, I hope seeing the difference between the two demonstrates the way my videos develop as I work on them. I'm infinitely thankful for having the chance to take the time to do this video right. I don't know how I'd have managed if I had to get this out on any normal timescale.
More content which couldn't make it in for time reasons is going in a separate video which will hopefully go up at the same time on a second channel, for people interested in knowing more. This will make it easier for viewers to understand some of the plagiarism and its effects without having to consult a 3 hour video.
The full thing is looking to hit the 3:20:00 mark, making it technically shorter than the longest video I've ever made, so I haven't broken my promise of making shorter videos!
We're in the process of finalizing all the visuals, redoing vocals for clarity, we commissioned some animations for a segment near the end because we thought it would add to the mood, and we're in the process of reaching out to the people who were plagiarised to give them a heads-up before the video goes live.
I want to apologise for how long this has taken, but FOR ONCE (and only once), it isn't entirely my fault. I think when the final video is done, you'll see why. I'd love to take the blame for the delay by saying "I underestimated how long it takes to properly document someone's plagiarism," but I couldn't possibly have known they'd have ripped off so many people. I'm just flabbergasted.
Let me know what you think,
- Harry
It saddens me to see this got removed. And there was no real reason too which makes it even more sad :(
David Meyer
2025-10-28 20:54:18 +0000 UTC
"But the problem is, honest mistakes are easy to explain. *dishonest mistakes* leave proof behind." -Hbomb
i love this quote so much, its so snappy
hbomberguys fuzzy handcuffs
2024-04-30 18:11:44 +0000 UTC
Same here. Patreon was a no-brainer after the four hour plagiarist evisceration. I have actually watched it twice already…
heich
2023-12-16 23:33:28 +0000 UTC
Been a fan for years, but this one made me come sign up for Patreon. IMO, you do just about the best work on YouTube.
Billy T Sullivan
2023-12-06 01:40:21 +0000 UTC
Very cheeky of you to hide the really juicy stuff for until the public upload. It probably would have been kind of bad for the video if you dropped a bombshell about somebody as well-liked as Internet Historian being a plagiarist when that's information that only a selection of your audience paying you directly would get.
Reggie
2023-12-04 23:33:40 +0000 UTC
I just finished watching the full video, and it’s fantastic! It made me want to support you here on Patreon. You mentioned giving the ad revenue from your video to the writers that Somerton stole from. I’d be happy to contribute extra $ to that fund.
Alice
2023-12-03 17:56:34 +0000 UTC
What are the odds you’d consider uploading a “clean” or bleeped or whatever version of the final video? A friend of mine has expressed that they’d love to use the video to teach the concept of plagiarism in their English class of high schoolers, but currently can’t because of the number of f bombs (lmao). Spectacular work, as usual!!!
Jasmine
2023-12-03 17:50:42 +0000 UTC
Surprised you didn't mention Nerdstalgic in the final video. Considering he was caught plagiarizing twice
The Brad Show
2023-12-03 17:50:14 +0000 UTC
Thank you for sharing the proceeds of the video with the creators Somerton plagiarized.
When I started watching it, I was initially excited to share with students an engaging take on citations. But it became something much deeper and beautiful. I didn't know about RickiHirsch and am looking forward to checking out that channel.
Edited to add how much I love that there is a playlist of creators to follow.
Emily Kugler
2023-12-03 17:42:11 +0000 UTC
This sums up a lot of my thoughts. No longer on Somerton's Patreon. I knew about some of the charges but had no idea about the extent.
Emily Kugler
2023-12-03 17:36:07 +0000 UTC
Previous (until yesterday) patron and supporter of James Somerton here. Figure my money is better invested here, for as much as I enjoyed all your videos so far.
All these reveals are... disappointing, but not shocking. I have learned to not put anyone on a pedestral. It's a shame. What shocks me the most is honestly how extensive the plagiarism was (aside from the other mentioned issues) and how so little of it has come to light until now.
I have been there in James' discord, about an hour to two after this video dropped. Plenty of the people there have seen the video and were already discussing it. James went silent, aside from a "Goodbye, everyone." post, minutes before actually nuking the server (and his twitter, it seems).
What I can say with confidence from what I've seen here is that Nick Herrgott seems to genuinely not have known. His reaction seemed genuine - confused and upset over whatever was happening, blindsided by 'allegations he thought were cleared up a year ago'. He hasn't watched the video by then, and found it hard to believe there is anything new.
In the only screenshot I saved, his response to me was "TRHIS [sic] IS MY JOB. OKAY? MY SOLE SOURCE OF INCOME./ I am a nonbinary, autistic, HIGHLY ANXIOUS individual who would otherwise be on disability were it not for this channel."
As someone else in the server quoted, "it is difficult to get a man to understand something, when his salary depends on his not understanding it.” - Upton Sinclair. (I just looked the quote up to give proper attribution. Sadly cannot look up anymore who posted the quote in the server.)
I'm sure he will be forced to confront the truth sooner and later, particularly since there will likely be no more paycheck from James after all of this. Sadly, with James' discord server disappearing, so did Nick's potential support net. The guy surely needs some time to recover from this, but he deserves some support after all of this, as another victim of James' bs.
Rooty
2023-12-03 17:26:15 +0000 UTC
"The full thing is looking to hit the 3:20:00 mark, making it technically shorter than the longest video I've ever made, so I haven't broken my promise of making shorter videos!"
So that was a lie.
dunderbaer
2023-12-03 17:15:12 +0000 UTC
Saw the latest video and finally pulled the trigger on becoming a Patron. Hbomber's videos are always worth the wait and yet I always hate waiting for them.
Harry Moore
2023-12-03 16:58:16 +0000 UTC
Note: I found your video on Nebula, and it was fully worth dedicating most of my Sunday on watching.
I wasn’t aware of you as a creator, but I am following you on Nebula now with all notifications turned on so I will be there to enjoy your next work.
Patreon Supporter
2023-12-03 16:29:10 +0000 UTC
Holy moly a great video, I joined your Patreon because of this.
I look forward to this level of effort only about once a year, so I will look forward to the next one.
Patreon Supporter
2023-12-03 16:25:43 +0000 UTC
Thank you so much for this. I'm an academic who researches LGBTQ policy and had (until now) been a patron of James at the Executive Producer level. I wanted to use some extra money from my paycheck to support more queer research and stories that I couldn't write myself. I now have my name all over a bunch of plagiarized work. I'm having trouble describing my frustration. You are amazing to highlight the other awesome queer creators (glad you like verily too). I'm going to lean more into supporting them (and you) rather than feeding my disillusionment, but it's challenging right now.
Patrick Button
2023-12-03 16:24:35 +0000 UTC
I'm sorry.
Ty
2023-12-03 15:25:45 +0000 UTC
same!
MaxMin
2023-12-03 15:21:28 +0000 UTC
Thanks for the new video. You saved me money I was giving to the wrong person with a Patreon account so I'm now a paying member of your Patreon instead.
Keith Gayler
2023-12-03 13:48:15 +0000 UTC
i really really loved this video woaw
Paul Bucovesan
2023-12-03 13:25:21 +0000 UTC
Me too. BHUTANESE PASSPOOOOOOOR
Ben, A Human Hair
2023-12-03 12:45:51 +0000 UTC
I had no idea about James Somerton! I first heard of him through his video about JK and how it had affected him as a former HP fan and I really enjoyed it. I am properly shocked. Great work on crediting all these creators! Idk if you always feel like it, but you're doing important work when you do things like that.
Manon P.
2023-12-03 12:18:34 +0000 UTC
This is a big ask;
But it is possible to have a referemve list or something to the work plagerised?
It would help to fact check amd counterclaims.
Angerboda
2023-12-03 12:03:45 +0000 UTC
Thank you!
Angerboda
2023-12-03 11:57:59 +0000 UTC
i have just finished the full video and came right over to join the patreon because holy shit son that was fantastically made. big props to you and the whole team <3 <3 <3
Junal-Lei
2023-12-03 11:06:14 +0000 UTC
Hi, just watched your finished video, great stuff, I can see why you didn't want to show off all the people you were gonna talk about, especially when James acts the way he acts when he's found out.
If I had to make a suggestion though, I think people may forget to check your video description for the playlist and I think adding it in a pinned comment would be a good idea, just to make sure they get more of an opportunity to be seen.
Anyways, take care and rest. Hope to see more of your stuff soon!
Discrot
2023-12-03 10:54:29 +0000 UTC
I can't believe the previews did not even mention the largest part of the final product. You mad lad. You incredible genius.
E. Filleul
2023-12-03 10:23:37 +0000 UTC
Thank you so much for the video. I was really excited to listen to it, at the end I was actually pretty sad, and then the ending made me tear up. I really appreciate all the work you put into everything and it's incredible what you are doing for those people that have had their work stolen. Again just thank you.
Evil Deadite
2023-12-03 09:37:54 +0000 UTC
amazing final video, i really teared up multiple times. and thank you so much for adding the recommendations playlist too, it will keep me busy while i await whatever you put out next (that and probably rewatching this one 3 more times)
Quinn
2023-12-03 08:58:34 +0000 UTC
great video but youre going to have to apologize to my family and friends for how im going to be walking around saying "bhutanese passport" for the next several months
Rowan Henderson
2023-12-03 08:25:45 +0000 UTC
I just watched the full version and wow...my jaw dropped when the James Somerton section started. I see why you held off on including any of those sections in this draft! Thanks so much for the great work.
Emma Bjork
2023-12-03 07:48:08 +0000 UTC
Dude, you've got to stop doing this. The video is 4 hours long! It's now after 2am, *and I'm somehow not done yet*! I can't stop watching and go to bed until the video is over. I have to work in the morning!
orestes
2023-12-03 07:24:22 +0000 UTC
Just watched the final. My guy. You really lived up to your name. This was amazing.
Dexter-by-designation
2023-12-03 05:52:43 +0000 UTC
Kinda boring video but ok
robbie
2023-12-03 05:51:07 +0000 UTC
Well then what's plagiarizing: the act of being a plagiarist.
Matthew Morris
2023-12-03 05:03:17 +0000 UTC
“This …ANCIENT case, which took place over a decade before i (and, statistically, you) were even born…”
Reminder: the case in question was in 1980.
I turned 8 that year.
Over a decade, it turns out, before my sweet Hbomb (and, statistically, you) were even born.
Oh, Hboy, you sure do know how to hurt me –
even though (and maybe because) you know how much i love you. 😞
Cuzn Ed
2023-12-01 18:41:09 +0000 UTC
I love the Columbo reference, it makes me feel a good amount less old that he‘s still relevant enough to be mentioned here.
Mandarin Medusa
2023-11-30 20:02:15 +0000 UTC
Eh, it seems bad form to advertise it here. I figured you could find it by looking up my name, but I legitimately forgot how common my name is. It shall remain a mystery ;)
Matt Redmond
2023-11-30 01:05:34 +0000 UTC
For whatever it's worth both versions of this have made their way into my video essay rewatch rotation. Thank you for posting these in progress versions, seeing iterative forms of a work is something I really enjoy.
Joseph Linden
2023-11-29 23:33:45 +0000 UTC
26:03 heads up, I think you skipped a word? "He didn't like I criticized Sargon of Akkad", that bit
With Quiet Eyes
2023-11-26 19:14:07 +0000 UTC
If it's ok to ask, what's your channel name? I'd love to check out a small content creator and see if I like any of your videos.
James Last
2023-11-23 23:14:25 +0000 UTC
Vaccines are really important, 1 in 10 cases of controversial now results in being long controversial, remember to get your booster and mask up
Sophia is pretty sure JFK's head just kinda did that
2023-11-23 13:08:10 +0000 UTC
And that sucks because I put a lot of effort and love into making them! And I don't put them out there unless they meet my standards!
But oh well, the thing about plagiarism is that it's one of the only crimes where you're guaranteed to be caught. By its very nature, you're doing it because you want to create content as low-effort as possible, so why would you spend effort to hide it?
Maybe these "creators" think they can whether the storm of controversy but they're still going emerge the other side unable to create content as "good" or as quickly as they did before.
Matt Redmond
2023-11-22 23:46:14 +0000 UTC
This video is great, not only super informative and but I laughed so hard at some of the gags.
Though, one really weird part about it is how sad it made me feel about making videos.
I've had a small channel for over a decade, no more than 6k subscribers, just fun little tutorials and video essays that I make when I get bored. I didn't even think that if one of my videos was ever a "hit", someone might just copy its contents and pass it off as their own. I've definitely seen a few from bigger channels that veer surprisingly close to my concepts and code, though at least one cited me as a source.
Matt Redmond
2023-11-22 23:39:26 +0000 UTC
when blair is citing the definitions of plagiarism, one of them literally says "an act or instance of plagiarizing" which made me laugh way harder than it should have
grof
2023-11-22 02:35:08 +0000 UTC
I hope sssniperwolf gets a mention in the full vid, considering that whole recent debacle! loving this so far, super grateful for the incredible time and care you put into your work
Christine
2023-11-16 15:51:44 +0000 UTC
All of what I am saying is highly subjective and you should consider it about 1% for the final product
psi43
2023-11-15 21:10:53 +0000 UTC
"Myself, my main researcher and I" is such a good joke, you should keep it in the final product
psi43
2023-11-15 21:05:31 +0000 UTC
You mentioning her real name (if it is her real name) in the new cut seems like a "attack them", because it has no context aside from you saying "this is her real name". In the original cut, you mention her by her real name over and over again, which makes it less like "attack her, because I now told you her name"
psi43
2023-11-15 20:44:18 +0000 UTC
Also, in my opinion, bashing Autism Speaks is something the final product should also have. You cut a lot of things, I think too many things, from the original. I get it. You want to be concise. But there are things you mention that are very important that should not be swept under the edifor's rug. The way you presented that was entertaining, so it wouldn't be a drag to a random viewer to see a minute of that
psi43
2023-11-15 20:37:55 +0000 UTC
Also, in this and in the first draft, you say something like "But the first time someone is caught plagurizing, is likely not the first time" twice. With about 10 minutes inbetween them. That felt weird. It was in the first third of the video somewhere. Sorry if I can't be more specific.
psi43
2023-11-15 20:34:14 +0000 UTC
Also, the first time I saw the video was this one. I am now watching the previous version. The "I was able to find????" thing was weird in the current cut. With the stuff from the other version, it finally makes sense. Try to incorperate some reasoning behind the "I was able to find???" statement
psi43
2023-11-15 20:32:42 +0000 UTC
Please, do keep the joke about "x% of my viewers tend to subscribe" in the final product. That was so satisfying to see, because that's what all the bad youtubers are trying to push.
psi43
2023-11-15 20:20:24 +0000 UTC
Can't wait for this one, have listened to the early releases over and over!
Dan Bryant
2023-11-14 17:09:42 +0000 UTC
Enjoying seeing the process. The joke should be... 'complain about Xwitter on Threads' now 😋
Walkersward (Adam)
2023-11-14 14:07:38 +0000 UTC
Fuller coverage of the Mil Millington/Mail On Sunday debacle (from, I now realise, 22 years ago; lawks) can be found here: http://thingsmygirlfriendandihavearguedabout.com/mil_support/index.cgi
Matthew Smith
2023-11-14 01:46:01 +0000 UTC
Top vid, this. A thing that should have occurred to me earlier, but didn't because I am rubbish, is a (relatively) newer example of a big company doing a plagiarism and speedily having their butts kicked by the writer they stole from (and some friends of his). Nobody went to court in this instance, and the resulting payout was *much* smaller than in the Ellison/Bova case (£1,600, to be exact), but it's still quite interesting. It is the tale of Mil Millington, The Mail On Sunday, and Things My Girlfriend And I Have Argued About. http://www.thingsmygirlfriendandihavearguedabout.com/things/saga.htm
Matthew Smith
2023-11-14 01:42:55 +0000 UTC
the line "there's a difference between *having imposter syndrome* and *being an imposter*" tickled me in a profound way
mycophobia
2023-11-13 20:16:23 +0000 UTC
I already love this video so much, can’t wait for the full version. Eeeee!
ChutneyBear
2023-11-13 06:19:02 +0000 UTC
Sounds as though she "liked" her the same way one would like an outfit on a Mall mannequin. An object to emulate artistically, nothing more.
Chuu
2023-11-10 00:17:37 +0000 UTC
Oh hey, I’m not sure if you already knew this and just didn’t feel it was super relevant but the speechwriter for Melania Trump came forward and explained how it happened. They spoke over the phone and Melania said that she always liked Michelle Obama and her speeches and read excerpts of the parts she liked best over the phone. The speechwriter wrote those down and then added them in.
It’s an weird little insight that Melania wanted to emulate Michelle Obama and liked her so much.
www.npr.org/2016/07/20/486758596/trump-speechwriter-accepts-responsibility-for-using-michelle-obamas-words
CS Drennan
2023-11-09 07:34:58 +0000 UTC
hi harris. i like your videos very much. thanks for making them pal
fisher ilijasic
2023-11-08 02:29:41 +0000 UTC
I just rewatched mandaloregaming's video on limbo of the lost for Halloween, and I'll be at least a little bit sad if that isn't brought up in this video, given how overwhelming the asset stealing in that game is
Wren Newton
2023-11-06 22:58:22 +0000 UTC
Huh! Apparently Ellison has always been this way, and was forcing Marvel to send him one of literally everything they made; comics, posters, fucking alarm clocks, everything. This is wild, and it makes me love Ellison even more.
https://www.cbr.com/hulk-harlan-ellison-soldier-credit/
https://bsky.app/profile/kurtbusiek.bsky.social/post/3kdinrwssbu2n
Adam Greene
2023-11-06 11:49:54 +0000 UTC
SELL ME YOUR SWEAT
Mike Cowley
2023-11-05 06:36:06 +0000 UTC
Hey Hbomb et al. Long time watcher. Just joined. Love the video.
Don't know if you want comments, feel free to ignore me, but @ 22:55ish when you mention his "third apology video", I got briefly confused as I thought he only posted 2 apology videos. But then I realized you must be counting his first non-apology video as an apology video, making his second actual apology video his third apology video... I think.
Point is my smooth lizard brain got lost for a second. Probably just me though. Anyways, love your work!
DiscoDame
2023-11-03 15:09:47 +0000 UTC
@ 48 minutes, with the andrew wakefield quote, u don't need to do this but it would be very funny if you casually called him jeremy instead
gardenofdelete
2023-11-03 13:46:52 +0000 UTC
The ending of this video is art. Pure and simple. I loved all of it. But I laughed so hard when the video ended. Thank you.
Amidamaru44
2023-11-02 15:18:47 +0000 UTC
Ahh I remember when I watched Cinemassacre/AVGN…I don’t quite remember why I stopped (pretty sure it was something misogynistic) but that was years ago and also before time seemed to warp around 2016 as if we were orbiting a black hole…or something. But I remember that period of YouTube being better, more organic. Like people made stuff that seemed to come from a more authentic place. I miss those days.
Anyway I really like the inclusion of Cinemassacre/AVGN not only because yay horror movies but I think it really demonstrates how even creators with talent and authenticity can have their souls claimed by Shang Tsu..I mean, capitalism. Important contrast to Miucin, who has neither of those qualities and as a lead up to Blair who uhhh…perhaps combined the absolute worst qualities of both. I guess Blair is at least a good judge of who to rip off, unlike those terrible jokes Newt repeated. Yikes. And to think now we have AI doing this in much more sophisticated ways than any one human can. Oh boy.
I wanted to say that the good news is there’s so much bad info/poor quality stuff on the internet that any thief is doomed to regurgitate something even worse and surely that will be their downfall. IF people can recognize it as such. So it’s really good you’re making this, and I can’t wait to see the second half! And the second channel thing. I want to watch all the things.
peachycliodhna
2023-11-02 04:51:49 +0000 UTC
Loving the recent trend of BDG showing up as the villain in your projects.
ThermopylaeShock
2023-10-31 23:20:57 +0000 UTC
Also the tone sounds really angry and rude when he says it. Makes it even worse. Definitely should be cut.
CyanideCrystal
2023-10-31 02:53:56 +0000 UTC
Yes, exactly. It made me feel pretty bad. Like hbomb would think I'm "not man enough" cuz my own levels are low.
CyanideCrystal
2023-10-31 02:48:34 +0000 UTC
The "femboy twink" stuff seems a bit too mean. I felt a bit hurt as someone with low Testosterone levels. It would probably be enough just to show your face next to his to make that point.
CyanideCrystal
2023-10-31 02:46:34 +0000 UTC
Love the flow of this one, it feels more structured and complete. I only wish you kept in the bit about Blair using the video filter to get away with copyright. I think that would've shown how's she's getting away with stealing footage from Netflix.
Also, "Bisexual lighting" is my favorite phrase
Andri from Pagefire
2023-10-30 13:28:55 +0000 UTC
Where has the ferret gone? What have you done with him?! Please just let us know they're safe....
Really tho I miss ferreton splimby
Scott Breitz
2023-10-30 01:00:59 +0000 UTC
I love the 'wikipedia citation' copying, and then reading the/copying out the actual article/the source material as sort of plagiarism. Aaahhh halcyon days of being an academic..
I had this one undergraduate history student I used to teach. Of course students are paying for essay writing, copying bits etc because insure of English, time.poor, don't care. But this one was a decent researcher - he would write one good source analysis, did all the reading etc.
Except for when he got to the research essay he would go and weave together some wiki pages.
I caught him, he defended himself on the same base (writing anxiety, depression), he went before the academic board as it happened in his other units. Still did the exam even though he failed!
The next year - returned to my class again. I told him I was watching and checking and he was all 'okay, cool!', and away we went. First essay (an analysis ofan unpublished source) was good, but the research essay? Sure he got better. At plagiarising. Apparently he spent the break refining his plagiarism - subtler cuts from wiki, grabbed some weird little known sites for 'poor writing' (yes he was STEALING HIS BAD GRAMMAR), etc. But still blindingly obvious coz it failed to address the question.
When asked by me what on earth he was doing he said 'my dad has been sick, no time.' Except it was clear he took TIME to do the shitty plagiarism. It would have been quicker to write the essay from scratch.
Just... 🤷🏻♀️
Enname
2023-10-29 06:39:36 +0000 UTC
I love the tweaks you’ve made to the video, and I can’t wait to see the full thing in its entirety!
Not important at all, but here’s something that my pedantic, hyper-fixating brain just won’t let go of regarding the ‘you’re so closeted you’re having adventures in Narnia’ joke.
You mentioned that this is a well-known joke from the Jimmy Carr stand-up special in 2007, but my first exposure to this joke was from the BBC sitcom "Gimme Gimme Gimme."
The character Tom makes essentially the same joke in the final episode of series 2, “Sofa Man” (which aired in 2000), when he says:
“I like the men in my life to be strong, to stand up for what they believe in. Not to be so far back in the closet they’re in f***ing Narnia!”
I’m not saying that this is where “Jimmy Jimmy Jimmy” got his joke from, but I do think it would be deeply ironic if it was, given what you were saying in your video about plagiarists stealing from people who they consider to be ‘beneath them.’ "Gimme Gimme Gimme"’s writer, Jonathan Harvey, is a working-class man from Liverpool, and a member of the LGBTQIA+ community; in other words, no one would notice/care if one were to steal from him. (I say this as a queer, working-class woman who grew up near Liverpool myself.)
Sorry for my ramblings, this was just living in my head rent-free, and now I can finally move on with my life!
Bec
2023-10-28 22:32:51 +0000 UTC
That is correct, and is the reason why brain surgery can be performed with local anesthetic applied only to the skin, muscle, and bone tissue, but not to the brain itself.
Bayes
2023-10-28 21:16:43 +0000 UTC
Yeah, miss that being specifically explained. It helps show her deliberate obfuscation; sure, content ID gets set off all the time for real transformative work, but any deliberate stepping around plagiarism protection shows some awareness in her that her work may not pass muster honestly.
Crescent Minor
2023-10-28 19:25:18 +0000 UTC
Someone else covering the same current information he is doesn't form a good basis for any plagiarism accusations. If Harris didn't use any of her research to help him, then that's that, there's no reason to cite her. It wouldn't be true. She doesn't own the real life events, no matter how iconic I'm sure her coverage of them is and no matter how much the general public might associate her with those events at Cinemassacre.
Crescent Minor
2023-10-28 19:18:46 +0000 UTC
Oh ... my God ...
Crescent Minor
2023-10-28 19:12:38 +0000 UTC
Mm ... I think the montage is the only part I want back. I'm finding this tighter told story to be more convincing, myself.
Crescent Minor
2023-10-28 19:11:45 +0000 UTC
I liked the original line better, too. This time around, I wonder if he got freshly pissed off and wanted to dig into a guy who'd earned it. Very understandable to me, it'd be an insult to the critter to call Luke a weasel. But, it's never a good look, even if the other guy was being worse first.
Crescent Minor
2023-10-28 18:46:14 +0000 UTC
You mean ... if someone were to somehow bypass all your skin and bone that does have pain receptors, and poked your brain with a knife directly, that wouldn't hurt?
Crescent Minor
2023-10-28 18:32:23 +0000 UTC
shortly after the iilluminaughtii brian deer tweets, someone on twitter let me know that one of those news videos of news videos used one of my replies to the tweet, so that was my introduction to the wacky world of cannibalised drama content.
Charli Harvey
2023-10-27 22:58:30 +0000 UTC
Listen bruv I am drunk and therefore can't be bothered to ctrl+F for precedence but the brain has no pain receptors
Bayes
2023-10-27 16:43:32 +0000 UTC
It is kind of a cheap shot, a retaliatory one since Luke made that same low blow first, but it's a bit of a brain snag. It sticks out, which might be detrimental to the next few minutes as a hypothetical viewer mentally dwells on how that joke was a little weird. - Maybe something about how longtime viewers should know that saying that Hbomb needs MORE T is completely laughable.
Chris F.S.
2023-10-27 09:46:19 +0000 UTC
as much as i loved some of the original jokes that were cut, holy crap were you not kidding about the new density of Stuff! made me recall the thing u said years ago about the magic of stripping things down. still, i think you could've left in a few of the smaller things. like the bit about the video filters? maybe ben shapiro will appear in the second half, who knows.
as for what's out already - it's really good! the video already feels really complete - heck even each section. you could probably recut this single video into like an episodic series if you felt like it - and i think that repeated "here's a thing, and here's what we can learn and why it matters" structure really tickles my brain in the right way. i have absolutely no idea what could possibly make up the next 90 minutes of the video and i'm hella excited to find out
completely nothing addendum but also quite like the extra gay stuff. the glove's great and idk how it'll look to the non terminally online but it's really funny in retrospect calling someone who lost all his hair from T T-less.
theparocine
2023-10-27 08:45:43 +0000 UTC
Yeah, one of the ways I was taught in school was to 'say it in your own words' rather than copy/pasting - but the extent of what that means wasn't always emphasized well. (Eg, change out a few words for synonyms and change the order a bit was seemingly enough for some of my classmates)
MattS
2023-10-27 05:36:01 +0000 UTC
I took that joke as being about that guy using the masculinity argument himself (that is, that he went for 'HBomberguy needs a testosterone shot and an estrogen blocker' type of joke/argument, while not exactly looking like the classical image of masculinity). Might be a bit too mocking, but he was the one trying to weaponize it first? IDK.
Don't think you're out of line for finding it a problem though.
MattS
2023-10-27 05:31:47 +0000 UTC
So... one thing that has stuck in my head for a few days now is the "femmeboy twink" joke. It feels weirdly cruel and dancing towards mocking him for not being "man" enough. The original joke, that you humiliated someone so bad he cobbled together conservatives two jokes together, badly, then delete the video, is more effective in my opinion.
I might be way out of line on this, but it's sat for a few days, so I thought it might be worth at least mentioning
Adam Greene
2023-10-26 21:16:38 +0000 UTC
I prefer this updated version much better, but unfortunately, i think the Illuminaughtii section has to be expanded. I don’t think her fans will accept this criticism unless the point is really driven home. The last version absolutely proved, beyond a shadow of a doubt, that illumanaughtii is a content thief and how almost all of her videos are tainted. The side by side montage was damning proof.
Brian
2023-10-26 21:14:42 +0000 UTC
I have also ended up listening to iiluminaughtii’s videos as background noise in the past and from the flow of her narration combined with extreme variations in writing quality and frequent mispronunciations it’s pretty obvious she not only didn’t write the script but also has no personal interest or involvement in what she’s talking about. Honestly it’s a step down from those AI voices, and didn’t even clear the bar of soothing my ADHD while writing code.
Also in the one video I actually watched she showed her dog which she keeps in a cage. 💀
John Mapley
2023-10-26 18:15:23 +0000 UTC
Just another note for you. Her story about destroying a toilet with a giant shit is also plagiarised.
See Dumb and Dumber
She is literally describing the "Don't use the toilet, the flush is broken" scene with Blair as Jeff Daniels.
Richard Pearson
2023-10-26 15:48:01 +0000 UTC
i really love seeing how far this video has come!! this is an amazing second draft and i can't wait to watch the whole thing when it's finished! also that dom joke made me laugh so fucking hard, the timing and the delivery of that joke were absolutely stellar. thank you so much for sharing your work with us!
Will Barker
2023-10-26 15:33:48 +0000 UTC
Only note I have, maybe I missed you say something, but for the AVGN section:
Lady Emily has done an extensive Cinnemassacre video essay, which deals a lot with Screenwave and the affect it had on the channel, and as a result the plagiarism you covered. I know it's possible you didn't see it, but since you both cover very similar ground, it could be worth at least crediting her video?
It would be ironic for your video on plagiarism to be accused of plagiarism itself, after all!
Isla Edmond
2023-10-26 11:21:46 +0000 UTC
I loved the previous draft, and this one! The pacing does feel better now, and while the time spent playing clips side by side in the first draft didn't bother me at all, the way y'all are doing it now does feel better to watch. My one slight critique of the current draft is just that I did like the sudden zoom-in on the "FUCK" in "fuckton" near the end of the content mill section from the first draft.
Looking forward to the full release!
Strathven
2023-10-26 02:37:14 +0000 UTC
Also maybe you could put the thing you said about the filters on illuminauti's stuff in overtext somewhere
Eidan Keiran
2023-10-25 23:42:16 +0000 UTC
Also, I don't know how to line break in Patreon comments on my phone, and I'm now realizing how much of a crutch line breaks are for me in my writing.
Ian
2023-10-25 22:19:41 +0000 UTC
I think you've done a stellar job. Also, I was going to do a bit where I copied someone else's comment directly and then attributed it to Blair, but I decided against it, and now I'm explaining the joke. At first I wondered if people were plagiarizing maliciously, or due to a lack of knowledge on proper citation. Your video makes short work of that notion however, as I feel you very clearly prove intention to deceive and a fear of being caught, not an earnest misunderstanding. Excellent work as always man. I love your sense of justice.
Ian
2023-10-25 22:15:32 +0000 UTC
loved this draft, the flow is much better and the reshot sections feel punchier and funnier. i would seriously consider reinstating the context of the 'extra study' Blair found, as it now sounds like the article she's citing there is one from the references section on wikipedia, which 1) feels like it could undermine the credibility of the point to a casual viewer if they check and it isn't there, and 2) misses the hilarity of Blair being SO proud of clicking one extra time.
Lisa Haves
2023-10-25 20:19:54 +0000 UTC
This is working much better. playing the clips over each other instead of side by side is great. the pacing feels great as well. Cant wait to see where this goes in the second half.
Gracie May
2023-10-25 19:29:14 +0000 UTC
Yess, very good! A great improvement from the previous draft!
Clara R
2023-10-25 16:45:12 +0000 UTC
I think his name was hbbomerguy but I am not sure...
Tedenljung
2023-10-25 13:08:29 +0000 UTC
Based on what you said about redoing the vocal track for clarity I think it will be addressed but just in case the illuminaughtii segment feels a lot harder to follow now, for a specific example I noticed you mention her using the version with the timecode annoying you but you didnt give the context for why in this version. Really looking forward to the full video!
The Bodily Fluid Collector
2023-10-25 12:48:49 +0000 UTC
I love it! I think I'd take the twink joke out though. I just think it's only funny when self-referential. There's also a point in the video game segment where the og has the dates under their name and not the plagariser, where I expected them to appear.
Eidan Keiran
2023-10-25 11:12:15 +0000 UTC
yeah that is sooooo much tighter than the last draft! great job :)))
WeirdFishes05
2023-10-25 09:04:04 +0000 UTC
lmao not the SadMilk dunk
WeirdFishes05
2023-10-25 08:48:34 +0000 UTC
I patreon subbed after the Wakefield video. I didn't watch the first draft, but I am going to step to it now.
I used to write video game reviews (among other things) which were lauded by my friends and some YouTube commenters. I felt like I was plagiarizing simply by using turns of phrase, to the point that I gave up the whole effort for the feeling that I was either retreading old ground or utilizing too much of the feeling of another creators work.
I must say that plagiarism as a concept and definition, is so much worse than I had expected or morally felt obligated to back then.
Samuel Laurent
2023-10-25 07:43:09 +0000 UTC
It's all excellent, but "not a real skill like building a house, or domming" was completely surprising and delightful in the middle of a very serious point about valuing our skills, thank you.
David Anderson
2023-10-25 03:44:19 +0000 UTC
I left a [admittedly, too] long and fairly critical comment on the last draft, and I can honestly say that this feels so much better to watch! The jokes land way more solidly, the thesis feels better supported, and overall I’m really excited to see the final product!!
M Roos
2023-10-25 02:39:07 +0000 UTC
That one clip of James Rolfe reading a bad script is basically the Ron Burgundy teleprompter gag.
Jesse Dusk
2023-10-25 02:33:21 +0000 UTC
extrude
What's Therapy
2023-10-24 23:45:06 +0000 UTC
Brian, My mistake, I misread your comment. I definitely see your point, but I think the intended meaning of the joke, that Brian Deer annihilated Wakefield's just as the Eclipse annihilated the band of the hawk, still holds true. And even in the very, *very*, unlikely scenario where Deer watches this video *and* decides to look up "berserk eclipse," I think the metaphor would still read. Idk, maybe it's better to take it out just to be safe, though, it is kinda teetering the line.
ahahhhaaa
2023-10-24 23:21:14 +0000 UTC
the joke is at 44:25
Brian
2023-10-24 22:25:12 +0000 UTC
I think the editing is transparent and doesn’t misrepresent the evidence. Like, of course Blair was not doing Brian Deer karaoke in her videos, trying to perfectly match him. But the fact that clips can be lined up this cleanly in editing, in my opinion, speaks for itself.
Norah
2023-10-24 22:14:47 +0000 UTC
I agree about the original “humiliated a guy so bad” joke. It was a standout laugh from the previous cut, and I missed it this time.
Norah
2023-10-24 22:08:50 +0000 UTC
Maybe I'm just dumb, but I kept getting mixed up on who you were talking about in the Filip segment, the way you bring up Luke at random points gets me confused on who you're talking about.
Chronos
2023-10-24 20:51:48 +0000 UTC
Love the Harlan Ellison call-back!
Fox Icon
2023-10-24 20:51:41 +0000 UTC
This is *awesome*; it's been tightened up so much while still leaving in the context about Filip Miucin being a crappy videomaker (that I thought was very important), the evidence for iiluminaughtii being a content mill was streamlined to the point that it was bearable (and enjoyable!), and I learnt a whole new thing about a creator I'd only been dimly aware of! This is fire, and I'm so looking forward to the complete product, runtime be damned!
Only two suggestions: first, "he didn't like I criticised right-wing Youtubers" is, I think, grammatically incorrect. I think it should be "he didn't like *that* I criticised right-wing Youtubers"; it just sounds really jarring without the "that". Secondly, I was a bit disappointed to see the lack of "I humiliated a guy so badly, he stammered out the most pathetic insult I've ever heard and then deleted the video" in this version. Like, you still mock him, as is appropriate, but I feel like you owned him much harder in the last draft, and that he deserves to be more owned than he is in this one.
Izzy Killeen
2023-10-24 20:06:39 +0000 UTC
1:04 BDG jumpscare
Victoria grew insolent in her chromatic perversion
2023-10-24 19:47:25 +0000 UTC
24:33 when you say Brent Rivera steals from people beneath him in sub count, the original vid ended up getting more views than Brent's because of people finding out he was stealing. It's interesting how the audience it can sometimes bring to smaller creators even though on the whole it's damaging, especially since I assume Brent made a lot of money.
battery acid
2023-10-24 19:26:46 +0000 UTC
Wonderful as usual - one part I wanted to mention in particular is the way you dissect the Fyre festival video. It's one of those things where it just verbalizes an uneasy feeling about it incredibly well - and clearly/concisely. Really highlights well the laziness and deception on display here.
MattS
2023-10-24 19:20:05 +0000 UTC
I didn't know I needed a better version of that last video, but this new version is way more fun! Thanks to everybody who sent in criticism, it ended up making this a much better watch.
LANCE MANLY, SORCERER OF SIN
2023-10-24 18:36:39 +0000 UTC
the new jokes in this version are absolutely deranged and hillarious thank you very much for adding those
Casey W
2023-10-24 17:33:42 +0000 UTC
At least here in the states so many people have a terrible understanding of plagiarism. One of the most illuminating parts your coverage of iilluminaughtii (hahah funny pun), was when she gave her definition of plagiarism. I teach social studies in secondary school and the number of times my students have either copy and pasted whole paragraphs or barely rewrite a source and submit it is astonishing. What’s more troubling is a lot do them think they are doing what they are supposed to be doing, that by changing a few words it magically becomes not plagiarism. They do not have a sense of the impact or the harm and frankly it is often hard for them to comprehend. I really can’t wait to see the finished product and maybe find some clips to show to my students.
William Lynch
2023-10-24 17:31:28 +0000 UTC
god, i'm having nightmare flashbacks to when i taught english 101 tutorial to first year kinesiology/comp sci students and i had to spend the whole term explaining the difference between summarization and analysis. over. and OVER again.
George Mac
2023-10-24 17:15:41 +0000 UTC
idk if it's just a problem on my end (not unlikely lol), but there are a few short sections in the intro where the audio and video are slightly out of sync. great video and interesting to see how your videos develop!
ryan sage
2023-10-24 16:43:29 +0000 UTC
I think this is version is definitely an improvement to the previous draft! I agree with the comments from some of the others about the twink joke not really landing (I kind of like the way you handled it in the previous draft more), and some of the direct iilluminaughtii attempts to hide the VICE logo and the shoddy research for the Stanford prison experiment being kept (which Kat mentioned is getting added back), but on the whole I think this flows better. Great work!
Nathan Orck
2023-10-24 16:01:03 +0000 UTC
As always, great video (fragment). It is very interesting to see how much it changed and didn't change in relation to the previous. It amuses me how much the final product changes during the editing process (even though when I think about it, it is obvious).
The part about AVGN really made me think. I realised there was something wrong, but chose to not look into. I grew up watching James' content and it hurts to see how much it went downhill. He must have his reasons, but still...
Looking forward to the complete video!
Hely Branco
2023-10-24 15:14:54 +0000 UTC
Nah i thought it was hilarious
[Gian Tobler]
2023-10-24 15:11:59 +0000 UTC
I think it was a good idea to move the "content mill" explanation from the start of the iiluminagthii section to near the end. By the way, would it be a good idea to reference Asimov's "you don't steal from your friends" quote again in the part of editors asking for advice to each other and how Blair doesn't see friendly cooperation between creators as a good thing?
CaitSeith
2023-10-24 15:03:17 +0000 UTC
In one side, I like it drives home the plagiarism. On the other, wasn't it edited so the pacing of Blair reading and Deer speaking matched perfectly? I feel it needs to clarify if that's the case.
CaitSeith
2023-10-24 14:37:11 +0000 UTC
It certainly is better. By the end of the first version, that hors... I mean, squid ended up already dead long before the beating ended. Besides, more AVGN and less Blair is always a win on my book...
CaitSeith
2023-10-24 14:32:18 +0000 UTC
good call to shorten the illuminaughty bit after a whole lotta people made videos about her in the past months.
kingmushido
2023-10-24 12:42:14 +0000 UTC
the agonising choice between giving myself a treat and watching this now or waiting to take an afternoon off and watch the whole thing in one go
Mannekwin
2023-10-24 10:41:04 +0000 UTC
28:29 kind of sounds like you're implying he diddled, may be better to say "having a family" or something like that. This version overall is grand tho! Way tighter, I usually think back to what you said in the Sherlock vid about rewriting parts and cutting out bits that drag/are tangential when doing my own creative work and it's wicked to see it still in action from you
J Downey
2023-10-24 10:32:20 +0000 UTC
Love this! Seeing this behind the scenes progression is really cool, very excited for the final video!
Jan Goede
2023-10-24 10:23:59 +0000 UTC
Already the intro is an improvent! I Likes the first video but this one has much superior pacing!
[Gian Tobler]
2023-10-24 10:16:16 +0000 UTC
RIP the funniest pride joke ever made
OrangeFlavouredPineapple
2023-10-24 10:10:27 +0000 UTC
You talk about plagiarism, but I swear I’ve seen a video just like this on this very website, with pretty much all the same examples ! It was a video from a guy whose alias was Hbomberguy or something. Way to go Harry, way to go…
Daz
2023-10-24 09:51:38 +0000 UTC
is there a timestamp for this ??
Finn, sitting upon their rollator throne because they got tired while ruling the world
2023-10-24 08:56:09 +0000 UTC
I'll wait for the finished release. I have faith in you Bomberguy.
Ran Schvartz
2023-10-24 07:41:09 +0000 UTC
Much better pacing, and the new structure works much better, ends up more enjoyable overall to watch and, no doubt, rewatch. I'd drop the femboy twink joke, because, even though I get where it's coming from, it's easy to misinterpret and it left me with a bit of a bad taste. A lot of this draft will also be examined in relation to the next half, if indeed this is a setup to something big, it'll certainly feel like an even tighter video altogether.
Grigorios
2023-10-24 07:27:49 +0000 UTC
the "i don't need to explain this!" bit at the start of the avgn segment is fucking gold
MisprintMedia
2023-10-24 06:35:22 +0000 UTC
We're adding that part back in!
Kat Lo
2023-10-24 06:06:58 +0000 UTC
this is my favorite feedback
Kat Lo
2023-10-24 06:03:48 +0000 UTC
The iiluninaughtii part is looking awesome. I especially enjoyed the new side-by-side comparisons with her and Deer speaking simultaneously. AVGN section is a great addition.
Sorry to hammer on a point others have made, but the “femboy twink” line is definitely a no for me. It sounds like you’re using those labels as an insult, and it comes out of nowhere. It’s more insulting to femboys than to lukiepoo, imo. I like the spirit of the joke though, and I get where it comes from!
Overall, I internalized more information in less time, so bravo!
Norah
2023-10-24 05:40:37 +0000 UTC
I do miss the aside about how lazy research perpetuates false information (Silent Hill and the Stanford Experiment) but recognize that it’s a good trim for keeping the topic focused on plagiarism and not other pit falls of shoddy journalism.
I also miss Bisexual Lighting Filter and the blurring of the Vice logos as a “she knows exactly what she is doing” example but understand that it may not serve the greater whole as the video prepares to pivot to the main event.
Itsa Wasa
2023-10-24 05:21:25 +0000 UTC
You're gonna need to notify some burn wards to prepare themselves before you release the full thing publicly. XD
But yeah, keep up the good work calling these people and the apparent systemic issue out. I always like your videos and how well they're put together and researched (unlike some people's, lol). Also unlike some people, you actually have integrity and know wtf your doing when it comes to creating actual original content.
I'm not really sure I have much constructive criticism to offer at the moment, so I'll leave that to others. Though, if I think of something or watch it again, I'll try to come back and mention anything that may spring to mind.
A Walking Contradiction
2023-10-24 04:51:17 +0000 UTC
I really wanna watch this but I'm also really excited to see you do a video on this topic, so I kind of wanna wait until it's done.
Arya Caroline
2023-10-24 04:03:41 +0000 UTC
Did you remove the shapieo jokes you. Were hesitant above ?
E. Filleul
2023-10-24 03:57:38 +0000 UTC
I think this is a lot better than the previous cut! I really enjoy the new jokes and pacing. Also, I think I understood why the Illuminaughtii part doesn’t quite sit right with me (still, I know). When that part starts it feels like the video was actually made as a way to dunk on that channel and not to explore the genuinely interesting topic of plagiarism on youtube. It’s probably because the rest of the 3h long (the work!!! I’m in awe) is missing so please take this note with a pinch of salt! Loved it overall and the double-voiceover of Blaire vs Deer is *chef’s kiss* but maybe you should have kept explicitly pointing out that the cadence was copied too.
Mimosa
2023-10-24 03:43:53 +0000 UTC
"if your a nerd- and look at you" im dressed in fnaf cosplay stop it
battery acid
2023-10-24 03:42:43 +0000 UTC
Some bits I really liked from the earlier version got lost in this new edit (RIP Ben Shapiro joke), but that seems like a fair trade with the overall video feeling a lot more focused and less like an iilluminaughtii take down video with a Filip story tacked onto the front (putting the Cinemassacre stuff in before the bit on Blair helps as well).
My one sort of nitpicky note is that in the Filip section you make the same point twice in a row about how someone being discovered as a plagiarist is likely an indication that they’ve made a bunch of other plagiarized work that went unnoticed. Once at 7:04 and then again at 11:21. I definitely understand wanting to underline that point, but the proximity and similarity of those two lines stood out to me.
David Daut
2023-10-24 03:27:25 +0000 UTC
I love a lot of the updates. It’s definitely tighter, and the new AVGN section is solid. I would echo others that I don’t think the “this femboy twink is right, I should watch my t levels” is quite your best, but overall I wouldn’t deign to try to offer notes. Very excited for the full version! I will continue waiting eagerly and patiently for the eventual 4 hour HBomb video.
Roger Gawne
2023-10-24 03:17:47 +0000 UTC
So naturally you are the master only comment is that watching the proof of x copied that gets quite repetitive which I was feeling by the luninaughtii .section
Claire L
2023-10-24 03:04:01 +0000 UTC
the part ii-luminaughtii pun doesnt work as part iii. unless you want it fucked up i guess
Riley Kind
2023-10-24 02:54:30 +0000 UTC
So much better
Con
2023-10-24 02:53:11 +0000 UTC
“If I had more time, I would have [edited] a shorter [video].”
Marcus Tullius Cicero, if they were making content probably.
Pentbot
2023-10-24 02:18:07 +0000 UTC
YOU CALLED HIM WHAT
Coughing Sounds
2023-10-24 01:52:56 +0000 UTC
hey coming back to this! im still in the intro and it seems like there was a big segement left out? when you walk in front of the greenscreen- i mean your set. the beginning giving more context around youtube plagiarism. (i think it wasnt apart of the "to cut" segment in the first draft.) looking good so far besides that!
Coughing Sounds
2023-10-24 01:26:54 +0000 UTC
Great work on the video BUT I strongly recommend finding a joke that doesn't compare Brian Deer's journalism with a fictional act of mass murder and rape and overlaying the face of the rapist over his.
Brian
2023-10-24 00:27:38 +0000 UTC
Awesome, love the video Hbomb. Weird thought, but would you ever do a video on Ai? It seems to dovetail well with the plagiarism topic on internet videos and content mills. I have read that many of those sorts of videos are now being made with it and it seems a pressing issue in the world with all the applications to plagiarise with even less effort than before. Anyway, just an idea, I would love to hear your unique take on it
Charlie Pickard
2023-10-24 00:25:32 +0000 UTC
I think you should cut this line. It’s pretty clearly insulting him by saying he looks feminine, which is gross. I get that it’s ironic, but we wouldn’t accept “it’s ironic” as an excuse for, say, Sargon to insult someone’s looks as a way to win an argument. And if this is the first Hbomb video someone watches, it’s easy to imagine them not even catching the irony and just hearing the insult.
Eli Youngs
2023-10-24 00:19:42 +0000 UTC
This is a much better draft. The Illuminaughtii section has really been tightened up, the new CineMassacre section adds a lot to how creators can go down that path without starting there and foreshadows the content mills.
It just has a much better flow. Can't wait to see the finished product!
Austin Luther
2023-10-24 00:17:29 +0000 UTC
Really nice update. And hey! I’m one of those people who bought Deer’s book back then! :)
Kristina
2023-10-24 00:12:47 +0000 UTC
I think it's one of those things that is fine if the person using the term is applying it to themselves. I'm gay and a somewhat effeminate, and I sometimes refer to myself as an "aged twink." I'm 37.
I know Hbomb is openly bisexual, so him saying "twink" doesn't hit me wrong. I laughed out loud at that joke.
But, that's me. Maybe it should be cut, especially since some people use the term maliciously.
Austin Luther
2023-10-24 00:09:22 +0000 UTC
I enjoyed the last version, but this one is a ton better!
Also.... noooooo not the AVGN.
HP van Braam
2023-10-24 00:03:43 +0000 UTC
As much as I enjoyed the old version, the pacing on this one is definitely better.
However, one thing you should change is at 28:30. You should instead say "having children" or "starting a family". The way it is makes it sound like you're calling him a p*dophile
Zachary Gagnon-Hartman
2023-10-23 23:48:16 +0000 UTC
Thanks for staying with just the facts about Blair. The discourse around her is completely gummed up with speculations about her personality and it's exhausting to wade through. I hadn't heard the details about the plagiarism until recently.
One note -- I've watched the Filip segment a few times now, but I didn't catch how he ripped you off, just his 'apology' for ripping you off. I'm a bit distractable, so I may be missing it. Could you highlight what he plagiarized?
Kenna
2023-10-23 23:45:46 +0000 UTC
Banal/annal—gold
bennettp123
2023-10-23 23:28:45 +0000 UTC
something’s ␎ beautiful about this 3 hour video starting with “tell ␟ the story, briefly”
what what
2023-10-23 23:27:11 +0000 UTC
i loved it personally
LitchSpaghetti
2023-10-23 23:24:38 +0000 UTC
Well, the bit where Illuminaughty vividly describes clogging a toilet w/a lot of shit sure seems on-brand for her.
FreeBard
2023-10-23 23:22:11 +0000 UTC
Really like the simultaneous readings in this version— really emphasizes the taking of material
Spirited companion
2023-10-23 23:18:09 +0000 UTC
Excellent as always. Good new gags (lol @ the drama youtuber saying bane-al). Looking forward to part 2!
Sardonic
2023-10-23 23:13:06 +0000 UTC
Will save the new first half to watch with the full thing, but excited to see it!
BLB
2023-10-23 23:05:31 +0000 UTC
Love this version!
RebeccaC
2023-10-23 22:55:27 +0000 UTC
question: does the use of ‘femboy twink’ kind of go back around to being not great if it’s being used as an insult? when used as a compliment it’s one thing, but if you’re using it to belittle the person you’re aiming at..? even if they’re a bad person? idk, i could be completely off base! just something that struck me
Starwin
2023-10-23 22:50:37 +0000 UTC
I’m so happy the part about AI reading out movie plots is there. I was convinced that it was just a fever dream I had once.
ThePeroni
2023-10-23 22:43:18 +0000 UTC
It’s still so funny to me that the first spurious accusation Iiluminaughty threw out was at a channel very famously run by a lawyer
Nicole Neyland
2023-10-23 22:29:44 +0000 UTC
As someone who has already viewed your earlier draft on this video multiple times, I can't wait to watch this multiple times!
Fender joshmaster
2023-10-23 22:26:34 +0000 UTC
The newly cut bits are SO MUCH BETTER, amazing to see it as a progression
cacao
2023-10-23 22:23:18 +0000 UTC
Boy, the ending of the cinemassacre part was hard to watch. It hurts to watch a YouTuber I loved continue to make videos with endless sponsors. Other than that, it was a great video, and I loved what you did with the Illuminaughti segment! One note is that when you say "f*ck ton of money," go back to zooming in on your face.
SuchaCaz
2023-10-23 22:09:27 +0000 UTC
@28:05 perhaps it's a nitpick, but I think it would be fairer to say *two* person production company. It's my understanding that Mike Matei was heavily involved in Cinemasscre + AVGN, even being the person who actually played the games in many cases.
R
2023-10-23 21:37:57 +0000 UTC
Rewatching Filip’s apology, I realized it has a lot of “I’m just a little guy” energy.
Also, I miss my fox avatar. I guess I have to upload something now. [whines, kicks rocks]
Amanda Jones
2023-10-23 21:37:06 +0000 UTC
Thanks for linking the HBG Live channel and reminding me that I have a 100 hour let's play of DK64 to rewatch at some point.
I watched the last version of this vid but can't remember any of it :D I look forward to watching this soon.
Steven Thomas
2023-10-23 21:27:49 +0000 UTC
When I watched the first version I felt the illuminaughty bit really dragged but then I broke through to the other side and I was like - no, it's good that it drags, this is what it is. That said it's probably better for everyone it's been tightened.
sven terje bang
2023-10-23 21:21:23 +0000 UTC
I just rewatched the last draft for the 14th time in the last less-than-a-week that I've been a patron, this is clearly an answer to a prayer I didn't realize I was putting out there
Dylan Roy
2023-10-23 20:58:39 +0000 UTC
"The full thing is looking to hit the 3:20:00 mark, making it technically shorter than the longest video I've ever made, so I haven't broken my promise of making shorter videos!"
Harry 'Rules Lawyer' Bomberguy at it again.
Charlie Miller
2023-10-23 20:57:58 +0000 UTC
I'm about to do a marathon at work so this comes at the perfect time. Who knows, I might even do some work while I watch!
Bruno Duarte
2023-10-23 20:55:34 +0000 UTC
I'm so excited for this video, I can't wait to see the final full version. I've watched the draft first half twice now, so I'm looking forward to seeing the differences in this version!
August
2023-10-23 20:50:19 +0000 UTC
I am about to watch, but thank you so much for taking your time and obviously caring about your work. So proud of artists and reporters and everything else you encapsulate, as long as the people on your team and who you hire. Just awesome
mollyrainette
2023-10-23 20:49:58 +0000 UTC
So excited! Can't wait for my commute tomorrow to watch it!
Genrich
2023-10-23 20:49:37 +0000 UTC
I'll be completely honest, I forgot I was a patreon. Seeing the notification got me that much more hyped though! I hope I forget I'm a patreon again. Need to get my hypes where I can
Jay Gardos
2023-10-23 20:47:56 +0000 UTC
As someone who slaved in a content-production job, having to somehow craft 6 blogs a week on a handful of wildly divergent topics, I hit burn out because I didn't even consider plagiarizing an option. I would pound my head on the desk until blood poured out trying to find a way to write about a subject I didn't know with any kind of originality and responsibility, and it actually broke me mentally.
Someone like Blair is so deeply offensive to me, and to all the bloggers, editors, and creators I worked with over the years. This whole video is a horror show, and I'll be irrationally angry for weeks over this shit. Just utterly unreal. Thank god so many YouTubers have shifted to attacking grifters like this head on. It's desperately needed
Adam Greene
2023-10-23 20:47:55 +0000 UTC
Please tell me that you did not cut out the “This part’s easy, I’m going to drink my coffee” 😢
Ciarán Saunders
2023-10-23 20:47:52 +0000 UTC
“It’s 3 hours and 20 minutes so I’m not technically breaking my promise of making shorter videos” is the most Hbomberguy thing anyone’s ever written
Max Marriner
2023-10-23 20:47:45 +0000 UTC
Just this afternoon I went here to see if I missed recent news and watched the Myst video again
Thanks a lot for all those great videos!
Vincent BAILLARD
2023-10-23 20:46:49 +0000 UTC
I’m salivating. I’ll wait for the whole thing. It’ll be like a double feature!
Lynn Short
2023-10-23 20:46:28 +0000 UTC
yay! lol i was literally just thinking like 🤔 isnt that video supposed to come out? tbh, my thanksgiving season tradition is binging your content so i like that we’ve been getting november videos the past years lmao
Creamer
2023-10-23 20:46:07 +0000 UTC
That video is one Casual Criminalist video on length! It's gotta be good!
Molly Brown
2023-10-23 20:46:05 +0000 UTC
Harry, you magnificent bomberguy
Cuzn Ed
2023-10-23 20:45:48 +0000 UTC
It’s actually amazing seeing and noticing the changes you guys have made to this video. I can’t wait to see the whole thing lol
UrDi
2023-10-23 20:45:31 +0000 UTC
Take your time, it's always worth the wait! There is quite literally nothing like a good HBomb video.
Kellen Malone
2023-10-23 20:45:26 +0000 UTC
I don’t know why terry keegan is played by BDG now but I love the change!
Braden Kerr
2023-10-23 20:45:07 +0000 UTC
I look forward to listening and watching this later. I can't deny that certain recent "long range shooting dog vs Jill's Cinema" incidents made me think about what this might have done to this video.
AViking
2023-10-23 20:44:54 +0000 UTC
let's goo
Olly Blake
2023-10-23 20:44:44 +0000 UTC
I have been waiting for MONTHS! We're eating good tonight folks
Kevin McDonald Nettey
2023-10-23 20:44:20 +0000 UTC
As a person who subscribed literally yesterday, I already feel my money was worth spent. Thank you Mr. Bomberguy!
Jorge Martínez
2023-10-23 20:44:13 +0000 UTC
Oh my god. Sir you are insane and I love you for that.
Azzinita
2023-10-23 20:44:07 +0000 UTC
Thank you my liege
herehavemykid
2023-10-23 20:43:53 +0000 UTC
holy moly! im excited to sit down and see how it differs from the first draft. thank you barris homberguy
Coughing Sounds
2023-10-23 20:43:41 +0000 UTC
I have no words for excited I am. Take your time, but also please hurry because I absolutely cannot wait. Popcorn supplies will be restocked accordingly.
Lin
2023-10-23 20:43:38 +0000 UTC
I can't wait! I'm happy you're exploring more short-term content again ;)
Nyx, the Deity of the Night
2023-10-23 20:41:57 +0000 UTC
However long the videos take, I am happy to wait for. They’re always gonna brighten up my day whenever they do finally land!
Simply Shamus
2023-10-23 20:41:57 +0000 UTC
Thank you for your hard work Harry, we appreciate it ❤️
Andrew Clark
2023-10-23 20:41:56 +0000 UTC
Damn it hbomb. I’m watching the other one for the first time right now. So I get to compare and contrast
* right that’s done now let’s watch this version.
** intro is definitely better. Snappier.
*** damn it your dulcet whingeing lulled me to sleep. Let’s try this again tomorrow.
theonlyliverpoolninja
2023-10-23 20:41:45 +0000 UTC
Let's goooooooooooooo
Cally Stuart
2023-10-23 20:41:31 +0000 UTC