No one lives forever! part 10.
Added 2019-03-18 17:24:50 +0000 UTCI have the main plot to this story roughed out - but I just thought of an advantage to my last-minute updates: Fans can make suggestions and have them incorporated into the story pretty much right away. I am completely shameless about ....er..."borrowing" ideas, if they're clearly better than my own.
Comments
I do have to wonder if the romance advice that Max asked the maincomputer to compile for him before will actually bear fruit or if it'll come off awkwardly nerdy (but maybe cute to Mink?) since he's not used to such. Since I think one strand of approach he considered before was getting to her via her heart since power clearly doesn't work.
Straw
2019-03-19 01:09:16 +0000 UTCIdea: the other guy's "inside connection" to the meta community is also working with Max. No big deal to Max since he's used double agents before, so long as they deliver something useful.
Mark Ashworth
2019-03-19 00:31:13 +0000 UTCI like this entrance. :3 Short, simple, to the point, they definitely have this understanding of being equals to some extent. Just hope Max hasn't been super clever and tried lacing the food with truth syrum or something else in an attempt to once again learn Mink secrets. Though I doubt he would at this juncture, I think he's far to enamored with the idea of a potential equal that he wouldn't want to spoil it. He isn't a 'mad' scientist after all.
Winkin
2019-03-18 23:05:47 +0000 UTCI love a girl that can eat! I can't stand women who order everything on the menu, nibble on some watercress and say, <i>"Take me home."</i>
Perfesser Bear
2019-03-18 17:56:55 +0000 UTC
