Paul's Story - RAW Chapter 1
Added 2023-06-18 02:36:15 +0000 UTCAs planned, here's the raw first chapter for the new story.
Please keep in mind that this is prone to undergo changes as I write the story to completion.
I hope you like it, but feel free to let me know your thoughts on it. Since I can incorportate changes until the story is actually finished, now would be the best time to let me know about any grievances that might pop up as you read it.
Comments
Oh I don't doubt you about working it I simply was wondering about the progress :-) As for the temp I can sympathize as it was 98 the day before.
David Stan
2023-07-15 12:15:39 +0000 UTCSlowly. I know *what* is going to happen in the story from start to finish. But the *why* requires quite a bit of research. And it doesn't help that I build my office in the attic, where I'm currently sitting at 102°F... But I promise you I AM working on it! Future Chapters should come along quicker, since the majority of what I need to research is for the foundations of the plot.
Sarkasmus
2023-07-15 11:38:45 +0000 UTC
