During the hiatus, I have been preparing Book 5 for release, including finishing the cover art and working on a bonus page 175.5, plus altering dialogues for preceding and succeeding pages regarding Tempest and Fireweed's dialogue, most notably Page 178.
I wanted to redo these since they created some controversies and I also needed to spread the dialogue on the bonus page. I hope that this page (included in PDF and printed versions) will lay the background for Tempest's exchange with Fireweed, without making it feel too OOC.
New Page 178 - curious about your feedback!

Lux The Pegasus
2022-11-21 17:04:22 +0000 UTCMyrkin
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