A Storm's Lullaby Page 180
Added 2021-11-18 11:07:59 +0000 UTCPage 180!
Wings were redrawn to look more like, well - wings ^^'. Not a very complicated page, yet I like how it turned out visually.
Lulu words from panel 4 refer to stuff Rusty said to her in the past. Boom.
Comments
"Help is coming" (Smokey the 'Ursa Minor' comes rushing up with a pail of water.... and his shovel.)
Steve Lynx (Boulder)
2021-11-20 12:04:43 +0000 UTCA peg leg xD May consider lol. She's frustrated, angry and scared - all at once!
2021-11-19 23:02:47 +0000 UTCI love the design of Rusty’s messed up wings. He really looks worse every time he shows up in this story. If this continues he is going to have peg leg by the end of the next book. XD Not sure if Lulu is just frustrated, trying to insult Rusty in hopes that the anger will give him enough strength to get up or a bit of both.
NTG
2021-11-19 22:03:17 +0000 UTCFrom Black Hoof to Rust Wing, Rust Wing to Lullaby Dusk, and finally Lullaby Dusk back unto Rust Wing. It has come full circle. She doesn't even realize what she is doing. But she is indeed doing it. Lullaby has got a little bite now.
2021-11-18 21:34:19 +0000 UTCThe new wings look really great. One little thing regarding Lulu's dialogue in the third panel: When I look at the page as a whole, my eyes are drawn to Lulu in panel 4, in which she is yelling at him. And it gives me the impression, retroactively, that the dialogue in panel 3 is also directed at him - probably in a rather load voice - when what she says and how she phrases it - especially the "I want Fizzy to scold me" bit feels more like something she'd mumble to herself. I think some form of visual indication for that would make the transition from panel 3 to 4 feel more natural. just my 2ct
2021-11-18 19:21:24 +0000 UTCStaying there sounds like a bad idea
Ironbuster
2021-11-18 15:56:18 +0000 UTCI'm starting to believe that all ponies love it when Tempest punishes them.
Lux The Pegasus
2021-11-18 12:19:48 +0000 UTC
