A Storm's Lullaby Page 172 v1.4
Added 2021-09-23 09:15:34 +0000 UTCBrave, little Lulu.
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Edit: more changes!
2021-09-25 12:02:30 +0000 UTC"... afraid of > a < mere storm." I should get into the habit of saving copies of these previews ... no idea what changed between v1.2 and v1.3. I think there are too many "Mom!"'s involved in panel5. One speech bubble for panel4+5 instead of three is enough, imo.
2021-09-25 11:51:04 +0000 UTC:D
2021-09-25 11:00:45 +0000 UTCDidn't even need Thor's hammer!🤣
Steve Lynx (Boulder)
2021-09-25 00:41:24 +0000 UTCYeah :)
2021-09-24 18:26:20 +0000 UTC:-D
2021-09-24 18:26:10 +0000 UTCLulu uses Thunder Shock. It's super effective!
NTG
2021-09-24 15:25:39 +0000 UTCOr just as a teenager.
2021-09-24 08:58:27 +0000 UTCImagine her as an adult! ^_^
2021-09-24 08:50:55 +0000 UTCI think this is the first time Lullaby looks cool.
2021-09-24 08:50:15 +0000 UTCLooks way better. She looks so much more focused and even somewhat intimidating.
2021-09-23 18:53:46 +0000 UTCI have removed the afterimage, after all, I think it looks better now. Yep ^^ There were few quotations to chose from and this one fits best :]
2021-09-23 15:41:05 +0000 UTCYAY!
2021-09-23 15:38:18 +0000 UTCI have removed the afterimage so it should be now clear she has her hooves on the cloud ^^
2021-09-23 15:38:13 +0000 UTCCrash! Boom!
2021-09-23 15:25:26 +0000 UTCPanel 5 is a bit confusing ... maybe reducing the opacity of the afterimage would help? Was that Tempest quote inspired by my chat ramblings? ^^
2021-09-23 12:49:10 +0000 UTCAwesome! Go on Lullaby!
Ironbuster
2021-09-23 12:36:05 +0000 UTCGood. One improvement point I think could be to have Lullaby already have her hooves down in panel 4. Since that would make it more clear she's slamming down her back legs.
2021-09-23 11:00:21 +0000 UTCLullaby to kill a wolf branch.
Lux The Pegasus
2021-09-23 09:25:00 +0000 UTC
