Lady at Work - Chapter 1
Added 2025-09-22 04:33:37 +0000 UTCThis is not a currently ongoing series. It’s a comic I plan to continue once my current comics are finished. I’ve had it on the back burner for a while, so I decided to release it now.
This comic is different from my others it's more wordy and descriptive. I’ve never done this style before so it’s a little rough around the edges. Why did I try it? A few months ago I started reading a lot of light novels, and I got the itch to add that kind of writing flair to one of my comics. It wouldn’t normally fit my usual style, but when I looked into it, I found other creators doing something similar like Wataya. So I gave it a go!
The name, Lady at Work is… well, I’m not really sold on it. I’ve been trying to come up with better options, but so far all I can think of is Secretary, which feels a bit flat. If you have any ideas, I’d love to hear them!
Finally the story! I’ve mostly ironed it out "mostly" being the key word.. There are a few parts I’m not completely happy with, so this chapter might get refined later if I decide to change something. But most likely, it’ll stay as is. So, what do you guys think of this form of comic?
Comments
I'm good with the title and the content so far, so stick with it
DavidCandice Long
2025-09-24 01:28:15 +0000 UTCWhat punctuation was missing? "I cant seem to find it" Also the reason for that size is so he can lose more in the story! Going from large to tiny has a bigger impact than small to tiny :p
Ruin
2025-09-23 08:25:18 +0000 UTCI liked it, I think this can go interesting directions. Two small points though, sometimes (especially when Kyouka was mentioned) punctuation was missing, and I think MC's thing should be a little bit smaller - maybe about half that lenght? Realistically, he's about average, and most girls wouldn't mind that size. I want him prohibitively small ❤️
Mojken
2025-09-23 06:11:14 +0000 UTCI did not read it too carefully, but from the gist of it I would say it sounds okay
Shukketsu
2025-09-22 17:35:39 +0000 UTC“Office Flower”
sparticus_37
2025-09-22 13:44:13 +0000 UTCI kind of hope she's not a yandere. I prefer her to develop into more mature with some lust
WJ W
2025-09-22 13:24:40 +0000 UTCHmm is reina gonna become a yandere? I do like all the extra storyline. Sissy secretary
Spencer
2025-09-22 07:50:36 +0000 UTC
