Stellar & Stiletto, Ch1 Page 26
Added 2023-12-21 18:00:03 +0000 UTCCloser and closer, to the edge!
Comments
Gyat damn! You definitely got the point across with how much she was feeling it in this page! The bright burst of color in her background with all of the intensity lines and her body language is off the charts! She gone! Definitely can't wait to see the next page. I like how Stiletto has fallen into a background role in this and it's mostly about Stellar. Pretty good storytelling in that way in that she's feeling a departure from the hum drum lack of satisfaction she was introduced with.
Tahldon
2023-12-21 18:55:40 +0000 UTC
